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Reviews for Twin Pines

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  • From Yustax on January 31, 2019

    It is such a shame that this magnificent story was not continued. I enjoyed it while it lasted. Thanks a lot.

     

    D4rK


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  • From ProfessorMcClimaxington on May 02, 2017

    This is sooooooo wrong in all the right ways... I fucking love it!


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  • From ANON - D4rK on September 12, 2016

    You have a fantastic story right here! First of, I love Pinecest and the way you set everything up was excellent in a way that only Gravity Falls can provide with its misteries and the far reach of the unknown, starting by the mysterious host who is trying to take over Wendy and the deeds she has done or influenced to happen.

    Cant wait for the next chapter!

    D4rK


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  • From Gmon01 on July 18, 2016

    What i love most about this story is how it has a darker storyline while still being accurate to how the characters are portrayed. You were somehow effectively able to combine the weirdness and mystery of Twin Peaks with the hilarity of Gravity Falls and I really like that.


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  • From Harem-Lover-26 on November 10, 2015
    Who's bob?

    Well, you sure know how to keep a person wondering what's going on? I hope we get answers a little soon. I think we figured out that Wendy is possessed by the ghost girl you mentioned.

    Also, I want to see what Pacifica had to go through in the red room, Lebam too.

    I wondering just why Lebam looks like Mabel. Is she a doubleganger or just from another universe

    Also, marriage between siblings? I wonder how Pacifica and Wendy are going to take it? Who will approve, who disapprove, who will object, and who will join in? I can totally see Pacifica becoming Dipper's second slave, after all it seems like her parents raised her to be a sort of slave to them.

    As for Stan, they may need to break out the forget gun after this?
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  • From Latham02 on November 09, 2015
    This has to be one of the only stories on this website where I'm equally intrigued as to what will happen next and the sex.

    Also, that part where Mabel was all like "Don't puke, don't puke" was actually really adorable. In fact, the parts with Mabel, Lebam, and Dipper are all so darn adorable, I love it!

    But my all time favorite part was how Mabel and Lebam "proved" Lebam's existence in the show. Not only was that a prefect jab at insane fan theories, it was also very much a joke the show would make itself. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Belfry on November 07, 2015
    Just when I thought Chapter 4 was the best chapter I've ever read, you ended up surpassing it. Wendy's history with Tambry is remarkable. Obviously, Wendy felt Tambry was much more than just a "Friend With Benefits". But the Dipper-Mabel-Lebam story is what really shot this story into the stratosphere! I feel that Dipper genuinely wants to marry Mabel and spend the rest of his life with her! I think he loves Lebam as much as he does his sister. and that would be an added benefit.

    The one who literally gets screwed is Stan. It's so unusual to see him as an innocent victim! If it weren't for being asphyxiated, he would be having the best sex of his life! Kudos to whoever has possessed Wendy's beautiful body, giving him his best orgasm before she kills him (unless he escapes this situation to rescue his brother!).

    Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2015
    ...Seriously, is anything going to get explained?! This story is just fucking weird and convoluted.
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  • From lb54 on October 04, 2015
    Jesus! Stan got fucked up!
    I'm really wondering where this is all heading, it's all so crazy! And awesome!
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  • From ANON - Harem Lover on September 23, 2015
    Well i should have reviwed sooner. But i must say that it was an amazing chapter. Well there were some big reveals. To tell you the truth I thought you already had Lebam posing as Mabel given how she was acting. I also thought that you had replaced Wendy for much of the chapter until i got to the end. Well with Pacifica showing up it should be getting much hotter soon, if thats even posible. I kind of hope she has some answers to whats going on. Also what do you think of Candy in Roadside Attaction. Its most likly too late to add her in i know, but it seems like Dipper is getting to be quite the ladies man.
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  • From ANON - RandomReviewer on September 01, 2015
    WOW what a chapter... I hope Stan is okay (and that he is not a possessed rapist).
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  • From Belfry on August 31, 2015
    I have one word to say about Chapter 4...Ausgezeichnet!
    (German for Excellent!)
    You wrote the best piece of dual innocence-losing lovemaking I have ever read, and then you topped it off with the best consensual post-innocence-losing three way I have ever read! This is now my favorite chapter of ANY AFF I have ever read (except for my own AFF, of course)!
    I don't know how you can top it sexually. But I have a funny feeling you will!
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  • From Latham02 on August 30, 2015
    I'm so glad this story is back, and with an amazing chapter to boot! Mabel and Dipper were so well in character, they're by far the highlight of the story.

    That was quite the ending, though. Those twists hit me so hard, I thought my head was going to pop off! I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From ANON - RandomReviewer on August 07, 2015
    Please update this story, it was just getting good!
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on June 01, 2015
    Marcus B.C. of xXDXGXx here!

    Just wondering if you would be interested in possibly featuring on my podcast in the future? if your interested, email me here: xdxgoochx@@gmail.com
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