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By : SWK
  • From Screwball on April 01, 2021

    Me gusta esta historia aunque tenga mucho tiempo abanonada espero algún día se pueda continuar.


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  • From Screwball on November 07, 2020

    I like the way the story goes, I'm looking forward to reading the continuation.
    Do you plan to continue it soon?
    Greetings from Peru!


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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on May 27, 2015
    Hello Mr. SWK, Marcus B.C. here just wondering if you would be interested in a podcast Im working on called the Fanfiction Circle. the podcast will be about me interviewing writers of fanfiction about there stories, etc. Its not been launched yet as I'm in the process of gathering prominent writers. if this interests you, please reply to xdxgoochx@gmail.com
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on May 09, 2015
    “We're talking about sex, Millie. And not even normal sex, but butt sex!”


    (From the back of the cinema)

    "Haha! Fuck yeah! Golazo Golazo Golaaaaazooooo!"
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  • From Edward_or_Ford on May 08, 2015
    Thought I'd return the favor for your great review of my story. :-)

    A very imaginative plot you're doing here, a clever way of getting the characters into a sexual situation that makes sense within the confines of the characters of the show, and the universe that they reside in. I respect the creativity, and that you are able to compose this in a language that you are not native in. Your prose is really quite good.

    And, yet, like you with mine, I too will probably not complete your story. You couldn't stomach the angst (which has barely started, BTW) of my story, and that's perfectly fair. For me, the ages of the characters (Millie's in particular) is my squick. I really can't enjoy reading it when I picture them, even when "transformed" as in your plotline. But nonetheless, my personal taste takes nothing away from what is a well-told story. I hope you continue it to its conclusion, I'm sure it will be great.

    (Five-plus rating added)

    Edward_or_Ford
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  • From ANON - Nightmaster000 on April 06, 2015
    Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on March 15, 2015
    Faptastical.
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  • From ANON - harem lover on March 14, 2015
    Good chapter as always. It looks like Coop is finally realize something is wrong though he dose care much. Also it seems milky is enslaving the father and u hope Fiona dose the same to the old lady munts. Also what is the problem your having exactly. When I have trouble with the sex seance in my story I read other stories for inperation.
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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on March 07, 2015
    Great story.

    That mention of their being other alien spies on earth has me curious. Will there be some crossovers in this story? Maybe some crossover girls added to Coops harem?

    Will Dr.K try to make Coop King of earth with her as his queen?
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on March 06, 2015
    Well then...your really going balls deep with this plot. a good chapter to really cement the plot line. great job!
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  • From Harem-Lover-26 on March 04, 2015
    Well that was nice Coop finaly becomes the dominate sibling. I wonder what Millie will do when she finds out that Kat is an alien and also what she will do about Fiona and Phoebe. I assume Coop will also make them his slaves.
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on March 04, 2015
    ohhh it gets better and better as it goes. I hope to see some back door action. i always enjoy that. i assume you hinted to some bestiality with Mr. Kat in the future. i eagerly await your next update
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on March 03, 2015
    ohh i am loving this!

    - Marcus Carvalho
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  • From Harem-Lover-26 on March 03, 2015
    with all the tags i want to see where this goes. update soon.
    I also like the rare cartoon story.
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on March 02, 2015
    hmm never really been up for kid vs. kat but good job.

    (believe me i know how difficult English can be (me being Brazilian)

    keep up the faptastical work my friend.

    Marcus Sebastian Silva de Carvalho (xXDasXGoochXx)
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