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Reviews for Blue and Red

By : Himitsu
  • From Imonlyheretoreviewlol on May 17, 2021

    Wow I'm really sorry to hear that :( I honestly hope ur doing fine like I don't even care if u continue the story or not i just hope your doing okay especially at times like this...


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  • From KaraNonakaHellsing on July 20, 2017

    I am loving this story... It is very enjoyable. Porn with actual plot, which is rare... The pairing of Zuko and Azula is very interesting. I want to read more!


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  • From ANON - Spets on September 05, 2016

    Great :D you're alive, please don't leave us hanging. I checked back in on this gem and saw an update, it was awesome but a bit short. Hope you find more time and joy in writing, I'll be eagerly awaiting more.


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  • From ANON - Red on December 03, 2015
    Great story, will this be continued?
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  • From ANON - Spets on September 02, 2015
    I found this fanfic and binge read it straight through Secrets and lost my shit when I thought it was over at chapter 24 only to realize that in fact it continued on in this series. Loving it so far but I do have some constructive criticism with some gripes on a specific character, Zuko.

    So basically, Zuko is shown as a tad bit... too weak, I can agree he can't begin to match the intellect of a functioning and sane Azula but he can understand things on an intrinsic level far beyond her. Also his firebending is only slightly less than hers, remember that he learned the true origin of firebending (fire is pure raw incarnate energy which symbolizes life, thus fire is more powerful when attached to the emotions of love and life... Which is why Dragons mated for eternity). Armed with that knowledge and learning the sacred Dragon Dance he actually is close to being her equal skill wise and only slightly inferior power wise (his flames are not blue and he still cannot produce lightning). Also he is a master at non-firebending martial arts being able to outdo any non-bender with ease using his dual broadswords along with the fact that he showed that he could stealth around like a special forces operative. Other than all that, you nailed his character pretty well, you also got Azula's character perfect, don't mind the 'she didn't progress as a character' cause her ability to actually legitimately love Zuko is a massive character progression. You also got some ages wrong but that isn't all that important, Azula would actually be 17-18 since she was 14 in the TV series and just turned 16 in 'The Search' you said 3 years after Ozai was defeated, but if it was the events of 'The Search' it makes more sense for her to be 19. And of course Sisko's age.

    Anyways, TL;DR Zuko is probably the third or fourth most powerful fire bender. 1 - Aang... Maybe Azula? 2 - probably Azula 3 - Iroh and 4 - Zuko.

    Please continue to publish this story, it is amazing and I am quite fond of it, probably my favorite Fan Fiction... period, honestly.
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  • From ANON - kironto on August 09, 2015
    I can't believe I haven't found your story earlier. It's so good!! Can't wait until you update again :D
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  • From blaquerein on April 23, 2015
    I enjoyed secrets and look forward to where you go with this continuation.
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  • From ANON - Neicey on November 28, 2014
    Thanks for the notice about the story.
    I'm confused about the whole thing but not in a bad way, I think. I'm still not sure about this whole making Zuko look like a chump with no sense. And it just seems like Azula is still the same as in the cartoon. No growth what so ever. It seems like she loves control and that's it, same old immaturity. Maybe I'm just more bias to Zuko and think he's smarter than this. Just please don't make this a soap opera, love triangle poor Zuko story. Well I guess you can make it whatever you want :). Question, will the dream they had together in the clothes shop come back into play? The shop owner said what I thought would be sort of the focus.
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