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Reviews for Brawl in the Family

By : Jayrich
  • From ANON - GhostriterMO on January 01, 2015
    YES, YES, YES!!!! Looma's here and now let the battle begin!!!! I can not wait for the next chapter I wonder what your going to do to Ben in this one. Forever Knights now huh? Never did like those guys, so.... Recycle those bucket heads! Thanks for the great chapter as always and keepup the great work!
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  • From ANON - wanderer3 on December 29, 2014
    Good work as per usual dude.

    I was curious if you were going to do the other alien girlfriends or not. Now I know. Decent start with Attea, since she was the relatively "SAFEST" female to start with; physiologically speaking.

    I mean Looma's size and strength are very likely to hurt if not KILL Ben under normal circumstances (at least that's my guess), so I'm curious about how you'll go about it with them.

    Same goes for Esther and Ben. The stretching limbs and body are no big problem. However, if I had to guess Esther must have an incredibly high body temperature, so there's.... the burning hazard with her. Again, curious to see how it might go with her.

    I look forward to where you take the story next. Wouldn't mind seeing other aliens girls (within reason) as well. Like one of the Kineceleran girls or other humanoid fan-girl or something. Just for a change of pace from M/M or Cousin-on-Cousin incest stories in the Ben10 section (not that there's anything wrong with it, it's just not MY thing).

    I've said enough, I'm rambling now. Peace out
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  • From ANON - GhostwriterMO on December 01, 2014
    Okay didn't see that "coming"... Okay that was a bad joke but seriously did not think Attea and Ben would pull off a foursome. I kinda figured Attea would be kinky, wild, deviant, and moralely loose. So her character is diffenantly on spot perfect! I can't wait for Attea's "revenge" cause I'm hoping for another great chapter to this story. What can I say, your a good writer and you cause people's imaginations and desires to ignite! SO again thanks for a wonderful chapter and I am anxious for the next chapter/I hope is coming soon (no bad joke intended this time). Keep up the great work.
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  • From CL4P-TP on November 26, 2014
    Great story. Will there be one where its Looma instead?
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  • From ANON - GhostwriterMO on November 19, 2014
    Again another wonderful chapter and again you tease us, naughty, naughty, and again we want more. I'm surprised Skurd hasn't armed Ben with one of his "Omni Weapons" like Diamond Blades, Heat Hammer, or Echo Megaphone. I like the intensity between Attea and Ben plus the fact that Attea is I dare say warming up to Ben in their confrontations. One of my favorite stories (not finished of course) on Fanfiction.net is made by a author known as Sallem Cortez 004 called Ben 10 Omni Harem 10 you should look at it. My favorite is the Looma and Attea chapter, it makes me wonder what the Catfight episode would have happened if it ended ALOT differently. I really enjoy your work my friend and I am very grateful for your hard work and dedication to your craft. I can't wait for Ben to "subdue" Attea cause it's not just the good girls that like bad boys, but good boys that like bad girls too. I wonder any chance for a OC alien cause I would love to see what you would create! Thank you for another inticing chapter and keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - mraanonymous on November 18, 2014
    okay this is getting good. i know that you don't support them but to be honest attea is my favorite alien girl in the Ben 10 franchise and i really wanna see (or read) her fuck his brains out. please tell me your gonna do that in the next chapter.
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  • From CL4P-TP on November 18, 2014
    One of the best stories on the site. Good work.
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  • From snake1980 on November 17, 2014
    just found this story and have to say for the chapters u have done its pretty good and looking forward to see what u do in the next chapter. but I do have a question was wondering if u ever thought of doing a story were ben is capture and is saved by the alien girls that care about him?
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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on November 17, 2014
    Another great chapter. I'm really happy to see a Ben/Attea story. i can't really find any stories where Ben is with Attea. Not even in any Ben/harem ones.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 13, 2014
    I was wondering do you do m/m stories?
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  • From ANON - GhostwriterMO on November 12, 2014
    Alright a great Ben 10 story by one of my favorite authors. And thankfully it's 100 times better than that "The Most Dangerous Game Show" that they ran. Seriously they are trying to cram the whole Ben/Kai relationship down our throats. I mean if Chrono Fanboy had not told Ben he would marry Kai he wouldn't even think about dating her. I mean it was so funny with all those alien girls, Charmcaster, Looma, Helen, Lucy as being a love interest with Ben. Now we are stuck with the wantabe Native American Lara Croft (Kai) and I do not have anything wrong with Native Americans its just that Kai falls in the Julie catagory of girlfriends with me. So I'm hoping that either Ester or Charmcaster escapes Gwen's new magic bag (I think she needs a good family moment/peaceful moment) and Ben gets a heck of a Thanksgiving party with them later. I can't wait for it. Sorry for all the contractions I do not mean to be rude. Rook moment Keep up the great work as always and thank you very much! Excelsior!!!
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  • From ANON - nightmaster000 on November 12, 2014
    Great first chapter. Poor Ben just can't catch a break.
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