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Reviews for Transformers Prime Evolution

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From Slothyboi on March 06, 2023
This is pretty interesting! Very curious if the cons will succeed in using the girls for breeding and the others as souldiers. Idk how old it is but I hope you update it someday~

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From Potterformers85 on October 14, 2018
It is a good starting chapters, can not wait for the update.
Vehicle Forms:
Jack: Amphibious Zonda F prototype and SwitchBlade from M.A.S.K.
Sierra: Cadiliac CTS-V
Miko: :Porshe 911 GT3
Raf: Earth version of Fall of Cybertron Blasters alt. mode.
Vince: Corvette Stingray
June: Minerva from Transformers Super God Masterforce
Spike: Some form of construction vehicle
Mikelai: Lamboghini
Carly: Ferrari
Sari: Quadbike

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From Hatfield1251 on December 01, 2017
I think siera should be a 1986 alpha romeo spider, and jack should be a 1961 chevrolet corvette. Spike should be a 2017 ford mustang gt, vince should be a 2017 Mercedes-A MG C63 Coupe, makayla should be a 2017 Jaguar F-Type R Coupe, June should be a 1974 ferrari dino 246 gts, Carly should be a Citroën Survol and raff should be a Bede BD-5 micro.(small one man smart jet capable of reaching 215 mph) oh, and miko should be a 2014 Hennessey Venom GT.

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From nakedman23 on September 19, 2017
more chapters dude.

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From Wapath on June 21, 2017

Hello I don't know if your reading this ,but please finish it.People are still reading even today.So please I ask you no I order you to finish it.

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From whitex on May 04, 2017
Divine chapter ruled. So much fun that you added a chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. I beg you . :))))

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From ANON - Tentacle Brain on November 26, 2016
Really enjoying the story so far, the twist about Vince's emotional baggage was actually refreshing to read.
You might want to work on your description of situations though, make it more of a cohesive unit rather than a long list of attributes. Just to make it a little more reader friendly.
Hope there's gonna be more of this coming, keep up the good work.

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From ANON - your biggest fan on September 26, 2016
dude this is the best story that i have read in the longest time and it gives me chills just thinking about what is going to be coming up next in the new chapter please don't let this story die it is beautiful!!!!!!! srsly i love it!
yours truly anon

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From ANON - bluebug on May 16, 2016
I love this story please update again soon, but also don't let me rush you. Also please keep writing becuase you have amazing talent.
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From peace456 on January 07, 2016
please write a new chapter, i am dying to read it one of the most thought out, action packed, and believeable AUs to this show. please continue!!!! and please post to ff.net i have read over 400 stories with similar content, all have remained and all have a lemon warning. just a heads up.
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From ANON - Kristoff on August 01, 2015
I like it so far keep it up.

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From ViktornovaMk2 on May 25, 2015
So far, I believe that this story is going swimmingly. Could use a little extra proofreading, but still a successful story (even if I don't normally read yoai).
As far as People and vehicle forms go:
Jack-------Amphibious APC
Miko-------Miniature Party bus
Raf--------Street-legal dune-buggie
Vince------Muscle car, vintage
Sierra-----Lamborghini or a Ferrari
June-------Coast Guard rescue helicopter
Sari-------light-cycle
Spike------Heavy duty Tow truck
Mikelea----Mudding truck
Carly------Shelby Stingray

I really think that June would be some sort of rescue vehicle, and with her understanding of the Autobots, she would not want to ever have to worry about Airachnid having 'air superiority'.
Jack would emphasize armor and power, but he would want to have speed.
Miko, LOUD and PROUD.
Raf, small, fast, and able to hide all his computing ability in plain sight
Vince, His car from the show, he really wouldn't know any better
Seirra, Sexy and cumm-worthy and able to make ALL the other femmes jealous.
Sari, a little exotic
Spike, something he would be used to
Mikelea, Tomboy, and reckless
Carly, Sophisticated, White collar, and British
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From ANON - Tyler Augbon on May 13, 2015
love the story dude

i have an idea for an oc

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From Bladewolf3 on April 14, 2015
hey when will you update i have an OC
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From ANON - Opus on April 11, 2014
This is an excellent Story - it's got actual story and isn't just plain PWP. (Though sometimes that's good too.) I do have one or two quick ideas.

1). Don't Pair Jack up with EVERY Bot/Human. While I a quick fling isn't bad, some of them are just... No. Prime and June are the two that Come to mind, since Jack or any of the kids with her would just be... icky. Prime is like their father - and that would be almost as bad. Though pairing the two of them up works for me, since the two work well together in my mind's eye.

2.) Have Raf and Miko join Jack on center stage. (Raf might need some coaxing...) Just because having Jack play sex toy all the time would be sad. Yes he's a stud - but unless this is going to end up as a massive orgy-ish story where everybody has multiple partners and nobody cares. Though that works too...

3.) An idea to get a bit of action - I'd like to see Raf/Jack action...

4.) I'd like Prime to retrieve the keys and take the original Autobots to Cybertron (To fix it without Megatron there. While they are gone... Megs captures Jack, Raf, and Miko, and he takes Jack by force while forcing him to watch as Miko is assaulted by Arachnid and Breakdown, and Raf is raped by Starscream (or knockout if he's unavailable) and Soundwave. Forcing him to watch would be the worst punishment Megs could give (He'd give him the option to surrender, and after he's rejected, he forces him to watch in horror - and laughs as his friends cry out in pain.)

5.) Megs adds a few more Cons to the mix - Human criminals (Possibly those into younger boys girls, since they would be inclined to hunt the new bots.)

Vehichles - hmmm... Don't know.

Hope you don't mind the ideas... And I hope you write again soon!
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