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Reviews for Bored in Ba Sing Se

By : EvilFuzzy

From ANON - Bitty on December 08, 2013
Not bad at all
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From Aysha on December 07, 2013
Have you read my Ben 10 story? I don't think you're terrible, I think this story is awesome! Now I think it's time for Toph to learn the important role that fluffers play on porn sets.

I just have two suggestions number one don't use the word "ministrations" ever ever again! That word has been used to death it is cliche and does nothing but make the reader grown. Number two you used the word "gangling" the word is actually gangly.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
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