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By : GeorgeGlass

From Yahegai on June 08, 2023
Somewhere in the rural portion of the Tri-State Area, a tall woman was standing in a wheat field and shouting at her rather shorter husband.
"I can't believe you bought a wheat farm that doesn't have any place to store the wheat!" she groused. "What did you think, a couple of grain silos were just going to fall out of the sky?"
Suddenly, the two SRBs landed at the edge of the field, neatly planting themselves tailfins-first in the ground.
"Yes, yes I did," said the husband.
"Fair enough," the wife sighed.
This brought the goofy spirit of the show into the story for me. The show's goofy spirit was always a delight to take in

"Not before I try something," said Candace. She firmly grasped the base of Jeremy's cock and, using almost the entire surface of her tongue, gave the head a long, sensuous lick.
Sensuous, a word that I didn't know existed, thanks for exposing me to this deliciously sounding word!

The drama between Phineas and Isabella was unexpected but very much welcomed, the conclusion to said drama was satisfying. The final chapter was an excellent send off and a quite splendid pay off to the story's sexy nature

The parts where Ferb communicates with Gretchen non verbally were always wholesomely cute to me

Whenever there's a Perry and Doofenshmirtz scene I always smile because these two were quite the amusing entertainers to me when I was kid

You gave a lot of the unknown characters in the show the spotlight in your Phineas and Ferb stories, I'm so happy that you did that. The part where Irving's SPF worked causing a bunch of people to show up to help Phineas and friends was quite the sweet icing on the cake to an already erotically interesting story

"Danville, We Have a Problem"
It's almost always puns and jokes city with you and your lovely sexy stories, and I love every second of it!

Overall this story is another masterpiece and a one hell of a sequel!

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From FairySlayer on March 24, 2014
I finally got a chance to listen to it, and it's so good I listened again. There were a lot of good bits that made me laugh or struck me as terrific, though unfortunately there was no way to note them all. However, everyone telling Phineas that Isabella had a crush on him for the longest time was adorable; the IsaBuford site was scary funny; polymer that "TASTES like chewing gum" cracked me up; everything takes longer to fix than to build was great. The only thing that could have been cute was if the girls (at least) were still shy about undressing in front of the boys when it's just for the purpose of changing clothes, like some instinctive thing. Not a deal-breaker by any stretch. Trojan Horse - of course of course.

The plot itself was very show like, from the invention, the problem, and the B story with what Isabella (rightly, IMO) told Phineas when he was being clueless to her needs again. Actually, it was one of those higher-level episodes where there was real danger (especially for Ferb) and then Candace and the community all rallied. "A very special episode" perhaps. ;) I did start to get worried about Perry and Doof not showing up, but it seems that they were saved, er, Candace was thwarted just in the nick of time. Terrific. That targeting-system bit was hilarious.

Poor Stacy though, but maybe the sex strap will give her ideas for later on. Too bad Candace couldn't think of a way to bust her brothers for their other activities, but she had more important things in mind. Plus people who live in Glass houses and all that.

The brief descriptions of the group's sexual escapades blossomed nicely as the story went along, and as it sometimes was mixed in with the relationship advice it was even poignant at times. When it became most descriptive it was excellent, and then we got a really nice recap.

Now I just feel bad for Irving and Eva because it's going to get very confusing. But I'm not going to lose any sleep over it.

Thanks for a really fun story, especially on a day that was otherwise driving me nuts. Still, even when I was home and resting it was just as good the second time. Maybe a third is in order too.
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From ANON - SWK on March 05, 2014
I am going to be honest with you, because I think that you would appreciate more my honesty, than empty flattery.

1) Of all your stories, I don't think this one was the more suited for a continuation. I think that the one focused on dreams was much open to that, especifically thanks to the open ending. This one isn't bad, but it isn't (in my opinion) the best one to do a sequel.

2) I liked how you approached one of the problems that I actually currently see on the Phinbella romance. (One that can be quite devastating to their relationship, or any real relationship). And that would be, Isabella's expectations. Many times she had shown that she is *so* focused on the idea of romance, and what and how it should be, that she misses the fun. This is actually a huge mistake that many couples suffer this days, the idealization of what a romance is. Isabella is simply too focused on how their romance should be, that when she find the reality, she might find herself dissapointed and downright bored. (The series has treated this, carefully indeed, because lately she had been discovering that its way fun to not expect a pre-planned event with them). So yeah, it's actually good that you approached this. I approve of that.

3) Sadly, the last point is the last good thing that I liked of this works of yours. It isn't awfull, in fact it's actually really well done. But I find it lacking, when compared to your other works. It felt rushed, the smut felt lacking, the humor and smart dialogue wasn't as creative as before. And your erotica doesn't seems as good either. Again, it felt rushed, it lacked a lot of the details that made your other works enjoyable. The last chapter was more creative, and much more relaxed than the others in how you dealed with the scenes.

This isn't at the same level than your earlier works, but it doesn't erase that it's a good work, regardless. I hope your next project isn't as rushed as this one.

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From Jomahawk2694 on January 26, 2014
Good, Frikkin, GOD.
That had to be the absolute HOTTEST thing I have read. EVER.
And the fight was spot on, but I do have a question
Aside from one episode, Beuford and Doof have never met.
And I know Doof and Isabella have never met. So why would Doof have an IsaBufordinator?
And when it shot off at the end, I was seriously going to strangle you if that had hit Isabella. Having that couple would have been worse that Ferb dying in space (but not by much ;)
Anyway, This story was awesome. And now Im seriously looking forward to Tri-Date Area. And the long awaited Stacy x Candace x Jeremy lemon ;)
Till then, peace
JMA
(and yes, I deleted my old review to change that one word. You're welcome)
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From Jomahawk2694 on January 22, 2014
Well, I thoroughly enjoyed that. Very tense and edge of seat style action. Although busting obsessed Candace seems a little out of place in your stories. Regardless, im guessing the story is almost over, and I cant wait to see how it ends.
Also, please tell me you're kidding when you say you are only going to do two more P&F stories. It would really suck if you stopped doing them.
JMA
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From Jomahawk2694 on January 13, 2014
Well. Holy hell, you almost killed one of my favorite characters. But very good on Stacy and Gretchen using their feminine intuition to save him.
But...I still have the uneasy feeling that they arent out of the woods yet
Please update soon!
Joma
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From foobar137 on January 09, 2014
Very, very impressed with all your work, and this story in particular. So many perfect details being brought in. You've got an excellent grasp of the characters and the series.
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From Aysha on January 07, 2014
another great chapter. The thing with the mummy trap was hilarious, you really captured the thread of the TV show. If Perry doesn't save ferb's ass, I don't think I'll be able to forgive you!

PS. Stacy really does need to get some, I love Japanese girls! PPS. If you could figure out a way to get Ferb and Vanessa together that would be awesome!!! without making Ferb taller or aging him at all, though maybe he can make some kind of potions or ray to increase the size of his manhood for her
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From Jomahawk2694 on January 06, 2014
Damn it George! You just had to go and use the 'unseen danger thats going to kill someone' move, didnt you? Aside from that this chapter was really good, and just like every single one you do, it got plenty of laughs from me. Also, after reading this, I want you to do something for Stacy, since she has gotten exactly one instance of pleasure in one of your stories. Anyway, I seriously cant wait for the next chapter!
Joma
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From Jomahawk2694 on December 30, 2013
Well, that wasn't so hard, was it?
But seriously, great job with this chapter. Im sorry if my comment for last chapter gave you the wrong idea. I wasn't mad at you or your amazing writing style. I was complaining because I was being an impatient little perv who didn't want to wait for the long awaited zero G orgy. Needless to say, you nailed it. This chapter was amazing, sexy, funny, (btw, I don't know if the last line was a reference to Gravity or not, but it was great all the same ;) )
Anyway, thank you so much for this amazing chapter, and I can't wait for the next one
Jomahawk
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From Aysha on December 30, 2013
the last two chapters were a lot of fun I'm really enjoying the way you're doing this keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Ron on December 26, 2013
The view was breathe taking but he's smart with building things but when it come to girl's filling he's a smart as a bag of hammers
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From ANON - Ron on December 26, 2013
Best two weeks ever but now somebody's in T.R.O.U.B.L.E truble Phineas better do something quick
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From Jomahawk2694 on December 22, 2013
GOD DAMN IT.
Seriously, do you get off on making us wait for the amazing smut that only you are capable of providing? I mean, dont get me wrong, it was a great chapter. Good advances to the plot, good keeping the tension building, and you even got a few laughs out of me, but for crying OUT LOUD, what is with the constant blue balling??
With that said, keep up the great work, and please hurry with the next one.
JMAHWK
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From Jomahawk2694 on December 16, 2013
I like it. I really like the SPF system. And I really like/hate you for the teases at the end of the chapter. Please update soon.
JMAHWK
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