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Reviews for Secrets

By : Himitsu
  • From Imonlyheretoreviewlol on May 17, 2021

    I'm so glad I managed to find this gem! This is gonna be in my fanfics to re-read list lol


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  • From ANON - majesticasfuck on July 20, 2015
    Omfg I love your fic so damn much im an azuko shipper and I ship them so damn hard and ur fic just makes me fly omfggg my fangirl hart♥♥♥
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  • From ANON - Neicey on October 04, 2014
    Wow that was depressing for an ending. Strangely it's not surprising, but i was actually sad for Zuko. And ending it with the fire nation preferring Azula makes it even worst. Though i still can't take away from your writing, but did it really have to be such a miserable ending. It's like hate for Zuko.
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  • From ANON - neicey on September 10, 2014
    This chapter was okay. I mean it was on point but I'm kind of frustrated that Zuko is looking like a love sick sap while Azula is still keeping secrets. I get it and it makes sense from an Azula standpoint, she still has issues. But i would like to think Zuko isn't that gullible, emotional but not gullible. Still great writing and can't wait for the next chapter. And I do like that it's a story and not just pointless sex.


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  • From ANON - neicey on August 28, 2014
    I like this story. It's actually a great romantic one. I just hope it stays this way and not become the childish soap opera stuff. You're writing is really good, this could have easily been a mindless sex story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Aysha on August 19, 2014
    That was cool! I especially found that last part, (Azula's panic) interesting, what was she afraid of? Is she afraid Zuko's love? Is she afraid of her love for Zuko?

    What will she do; When she realizes her love for Zoko is genuine? Will she betray him, and her own heart, just to prove to herself that she can't be controlled by some thing as patty and pathetic as love?

    Or will she embrace her love for him and drive him to become the powerful Fire Lord that she believes the Fire Nation deserves? And squash her father's attempt to retake power, will she realize that it was Ozi who poisoned her in the first place? After all, he knows so much about what's going on: he would have known about Zuko's meeting he would have calculated that his brother would never miss an opportunity to enjoy such a rare tea,and recognize the poison for what it was.

    He would have suspected at the very least Zuko's affection for Azula, and of course he knew all about the Ark, the pearls and the coven. Right? That Ozi is one tricky clever son of a bitch!

    Or maybe I'm just reading too much into things. :D
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  • From Aysha on August 08, 2014
    That was a lot of fun! Which I think is the best compliment anyone can give a writer; so I'll say it again, I really enjoyed reading that chapter it was a lot of fun!
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  • From Aysha on July 27, 2014
    another interesting and enjoyable chapter. you really do seem to have an intuitive understanding of these characters and I'm looking forward to what comes next.
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  • From Aysha on July 09, 2014
    THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!
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  • From Christopher11 on July 08, 2014
    Torture never gets you anything but "Fuck you!" information in the real world. The better thing that Zuko could have done would be to create a rappor with the man he was questioning and convince him that Zuko could protect him.
    Zuko is also going to have a severe wakeup call when he finds out that his support is slim among a lot of the most important people in the Fire Nation and that him 'being the Fire Lord' will not stop people from trying to take him down, by hook or crook, unless he learns why those people are against him and fixes the issues that make them go against him (or at least listens to their grievances).
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  • From Aysha on June 28, 2014
    this was a great chapter, I'm glad that's a Zuko finally expressed his feelings for Azula. I do hope in the next chapter that he would take the time to explain everything that's happened. I'm really hoping is that is this cool story that you're writing doesn't degenerate into a soap opera, because I really hate soap operas!

    they are obviously some very interesting plot-bunnies bouncing around in your head. I'm looking forward to finding out what's in the arc, and seeing how the assassination attempt develops. I just hope you don't let this thing with Miso carry on too much longer. I think of Azula should put him in his place.
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  • From Aysha on April 18, 2014
    Yea! a very good chapter!I like that Azula and Zoko's relationship is slowly developing into something more wholesome. This new plot that you've come up with it was very interesting, waiting to see where it leads. Also just curious what's in the arc?
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  • From Aysha on April 09, 2014
    That was both fun and interesting, as I have come to expect. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From Aysha on April 03, 2014
    Hi, I'm still waiting for your next chapter!
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  • From Aysha on March 20, 2014
    I bet I know what that tee was. we still don't know what was in the Ark. and I do hope that toph doesn't let Zuko get away with just walking away from that conversation.
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