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Reviews for Ron's toys

By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2015
    Awesome story. Please update again! Hopefully Anne appears again soon.
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  • From ANON - HeartofVirgo on January 08, 2015
    I'll admit, I've been waiting on Shego making an appearance since the very beginning. And surprisingly, it's not even the sex I like the most. Ron's slow, steady corruption is simply fascinating. You have added a depth of character to them I find amazing.
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  • From ANON - brock on December 25, 2014
    Holy crap you're back.I almost gave up man. It's been so quiet on here. Anyways beautifully done chapters as always and im really looking forward to the next updates,hope you will continue to post updates
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  • From bigherb81 on December 01, 2014
    Way to go I gotta say that was one helluva curve thrown in at the end there, in more ways than one. You did an incredible job on this one too, not to mention that the scene between Ron and Kim brought back some pleasant memories. Also great build and love the way things ended between the two, friggin hilarious. Also really can't wait to see how deep Ron goes down this rabbit hole, and how it'll end up. Can't wait for the next chapter I will definitely be here till the end.
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  • From ANON - MathiasBlue on November 26, 2014
    Holy sweet jeebus...I'm so glad I decided to check this fic again on a whim. So glad to see you updated XD Nice chapter too, and I've got to say that Shego's definition of Evil...I like it. Less murderous psychopathy required, more apathy toward legal consequence.

    Ron tapped some green booty! :p
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  • From xXDasXGoochXx on November 20, 2014
    Oh dear mother of a sacrilegious, blasphemous, whore.....that was gucking fantastic. MOOOOOAAAAR.
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  • From ANON - Somewhereoutthere on November 20, 2014
    Hey nice to see a new chapter! This is another great chapter, I really enjoyed this one. Although I did feel that the first part was long winded especially the first lemon but I can understand why it was so long. I am guessing you were trying to emphasis how important this first time is to Kim and Ron. I loved the Shego part, it was amazing especially with how cute Shego was after Ron went wild literally! I am really looking forward to the Kim and Ann chapter, it is one of the most anticipating pair for me. Considering how Ron might be going down the "Evil Route", I am now wondering if he cares or if he is unconsciously trying to get the girls he sleeps with pregnant (like an alpha trying to breed with as much mates as possible)? It would be extremely interesting if someone like Ann or Shego gets pregnant. Their reactions, Rons reactions, his thoughts on Ann carrying his child despite him dating Kim and if both (Ann and Kim) are pregnant what would he do or think? Thanks for replying to the review and I look forward to the future chapters.
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  • From Belfry on November 19, 2014
    Very good chapter. Shows that everyone, EVERYONE, has a dark side about them. Acting on it does not necessarily make him or her evil. I love the reason for Shego's turning evil. I'm certain that even Kim could turn if the right circumstances were to occur.
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  • From ANON - Wanderer3 on August 05, 2014
    Sorry for not posting a review sooner than now.

    Have to say the story is still quite good.

    I hope you get back to this story soon.

    In terms of what else to suggest, Not sure what else I can say that I haven't mentioned in my first review, especially considering Ron is apparently keeping his anonymity in these situations.

    Only other thing I got that could be added would be might be perhaps a "Time Stopper". Basically puts everyone else (or just the subject Ron wants to use it on) on 'Pause' yet Ron can interact with them, ...almost like the Narcoleptor. Weird I know, but hey... got the idea from Japan so ... *shrugs*
    There's also perhaps either .... having Ron affected by the Narcoleptor and Kim being the curious one.... that's about all I got.

    Again not sure what else can be done to keep the anonymous factor you have going. But there are PLENTY of pretty ladies to work with.

    Keep up the good work, peace out!
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  • From ANON - Daniel on June 18, 2014
    Amazing writing keep up the amazing work :) when does the next part come out ??
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  • From MathiasBlue on June 11, 2014
    From the looks of it, I've guessing this has been abandoned huh?

    Got to admit, if that's the case I'll be more than a little disappointed. This has been pretty damn awesome so far.
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  • From ANON - Somewhereoutthere on January 21, 2014
    Yet another amazing chapter, I personally love the story and do not find it boring. The emotions of the characters is fantastically expressed. A little bit of comedy also helps to keep the story interesting. The smut is there but believe it or not I am here more for the story then the smut. I originally found this on fanfiction.net but sadly it was removed so I followed it here to this site. I like this Ron very much despite his actions being very questionable but since this is a smut fic I am willing to let this go. The reason I like this Ron is because his emotions are well written and the choices he makes will determine his path as well as the consequences. Another reason I like this fic is because it is somewhat of a harem though not really. Now as to what girls or toys that I would like to see would be: Shego with a pheromone device that when combined with Ron's Mystical Monkey powers make him completely and utterly irresistible. Bonnie and her sisters with a whip like toy (Monkey artifact) that causes extreme pleasure with a very minute amount of pain. Vivian Porter with a mind reading device that allows Ron to know her very thoughts and emotions thus allowing him to get close to her. A Kim and Anne chapter with a device that makes them think that everything is a dream or illusion but is in fact real, they would have sex with Ron together but think nothing of it because to them its just a dirty dream, it would also make Kim and Anne embarrassed around each other due to the "dream". Other than that I look forward to more chapters from this story. Since this is the only story I am reading on this site.
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  • From ANON - Entriano on January 21, 2014
    Keep up the good work. I find myself enjoying the storyline as much as the smut. Would love to see a Ron Bon but ill let you decide because you have been very impressive
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  • From bigherb81 on January 20, 2014
    As usual enjoyed it immensely I personally love the build with the story kind of makes it a little more exciting. Not to mention as righteous as most people pretend to be they'd do the same thing of given the opportunity. Anywho awesome addition to the series I must admit though I am curious as to how this will turn out or if it will continue on. I just hope it all ends well for the Ronman. So definitely can't wait to see what the next toy will be, and the next "victim". Hmm is that too harsh a word? It is the only word that seems to fit either way can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ninesenshi on January 17, 2014
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