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By : sandman-nobody
  • From ANON - Somewhereoutthere on January 09, 2017

    Hey, nice to see this story updated, I've been checking this every few months. I am pleased with the shorter chapters as it makes it alot easier to read. I am extremely excited about a certain someones pregnancy "wink wink" although I am surprised she doesn't really notice this yet since shes a doctor and had two previous pregnancies. I am on guard on the sudden James hate though, hopefully it doesn't become extreme because the show had him accept Ron quite easily. Still hoping for Vivian Porters appearance because she only had a one time appearance on the show and she rarely appears even on fanfics. Hopefully you can do something for her, as she is like Kim very capable but due to her looks and gender, she became disregared and looked down upon by her peers in the scientific community which lead to her defensive actions. In other words she needs serious ronshine. Anyways very happy to see you again and looking forward to more chapters in the future.


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  • From ANON - on January 08, 2017

    Love the story. I mean I absolutely love it. Can't hardly wait for the next update.


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  • From ANON - Harem lover 26 on January 04, 2017

    It's me again.  I just realized that you had forgotten about Yori.  What did she want to talk to Ron about last chapter and how she will fit into his changing of values.  I hope she teaches Ron to accept and balance his dark side as opposed to She go's advice to totally embrace it.  I also hope she corrupt Kim a little so she likes yuir love and threesomes.


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  • From ANON - Harem Lover 26 on January 03, 2017

    Great chapter.

    Also about the smaller chapter size.  I think its a good thing.  Because Why your chapters are great there a little much to be read in one sitting and with no way to bookmark a small chapter really help.


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  • From ANON - on January 02, 2017

    I had to do a double-take when I saw this story was updated. Holy Fuck! Merry christmas indeed. I love how your showing him slowly break down under anxiety and doubt. Can't wait to see what he does next!

    Oh and the smaller chapters are certainly not a problem, so long as you update this and other stories more frequently ;)


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  • From ninesenshi on December 28, 2016

    Chap 5.  Ah, the drama.  You know what you have to do, Ron.  Take charge of them both!

     

    Good to see you back, I was thinking it might never happen.  Good luck with the regular updates.


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  • From ManKyYen on December 27, 2016

    Hey there. I just saw the new chapter and took it as an opportunity to reread the whole story. Still a very enjoyable read. :-)

    Mostly I post this to address some of what you said in your author notes though. Specifically that some (many?) people want the sex to be delivered quicker. The vast majority of porn on the net is just like that, quick to the action with at best a little bit of plot or character introduction. Finding a story like yours, one with solid erotic content that is still first and foremost an actual story, is relatively rare and always a joy for me. Especially one that explores the kinkier sides of sexual relationships. 

    So thank you very much for the time and effort you are putting into this and please continue to be awesome. :-)


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  • From Aysha on November 23, 2016

    Okay, chapter 1 was great.


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  • From ANON - on July 18, 2016

    seriously - when do we see the first pregnant girl/woman blessed by Ron's "gift"


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  • From ANON - on July 02, 2016
    If the day ever comes that you finish this story, I'll truly be able to die happy! Seriously though thisnisnthe best story I've read in so long! 
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  • From ANON - wolfen1064 on October 25, 2015
    Awesome story love how you make things work and dont just write cheap smut. I really like how you make charcters seem real with feelings and doubts, flaws. Iwas shocked when Shego sought out Ron to bed him talk about a out of the blue happening never thought of that.I hope you plan on continuing soon i really like your story you are one of the better authors i have encounterd keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - DarkAlpha on October 20, 2015
    Very good i like it ... more soon ?
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  • From ANON - The Sir on September 16, 2015
    This is one of the most interesting stories ive read in a while, I find the storyline compelling and I eagerly await the fifth chapter. I do have to point out something and that is Rons character development, I feel that he is not asserting himself nor living up to his full potential. He has no goal in mind and this stunts his growth as it seems he's simply going along with the flow which can be detrimental as he has no contingencies for possible failures. Id enjoy seeing him gradually take on a more dark and serious role in his impending villain hood. Perhaps you could add drama by making his decision cause conflict with kim and their relationship hiatus from the event could be a possible way for you to expand in the KP world with even a few more villain ladies.
    Cant wait for the next installment so pause your life and write damn you WRITE!
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  • From ANON - unclefester84 on July 05, 2015
    Is this story dead? it's been a really long time since the last update...
    Please tell me it's not dead
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  • From ANON - mraanonymous on March 16, 2015
    Please update! you need to update this thing. And may i suggest bonnie next time.
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