Reviews for Ron's toysBy : sandman-nobody |
Hey, nice to see this story updated, I've been checking this every few months. I am pleased with the shorter chapters as it makes it alot easier to read. I am extremely excited about a certain someones pregnancy "wink wink" although I am surprised she doesn't really notice this yet since shes a doctor and had two previous pregnancies. I am on guard on the sudden James hate though, hopefully it doesn't become extreme because the show had him accept Ron quite easily. Still hoping for Vivian Porters appearance because she only had a one time appearance on the show and she rarely appears even on fanfics. Hopefully you can do something for her, as she is like Kim very capable but due to her looks and gender, she became disregared and looked down upon by her peers in the scientific community which lead to her defensive actions. In other words she needs serious ronshine. Anyways very happy to see you again and looking forward to more chapters in the future.
Love the story. I mean I absolutely love it. Can't hardly wait for the next update.
It's me again. I just realized that you had forgotten about Yori. What did she want to talk to Ron about last chapter and how she will fit into his changing of values. I hope she teaches Ron to accept and balance his dark side as opposed to She go's advice to totally embrace it. I also hope she corrupt Kim a little so she likes yuir love and threesomes.
Great chapter.
Also about the smaller chapter size. I think its a good thing. Because Why your chapters are great there a little much to be read in one sitting and with no way to bookmark a small chapter really help.
I had to do a double-take when I saw this story was updated. Holy Fuck! Merry christmas indeed. I love how your showing him slowly break down under anxiety and doubt. Can't wait to see what he does next!
Oh and the smaller chapters are certainly not a problem, so long as you update this and other stories more frequently ;)
Chap 5. Ah, the drama. You know what you have to do, Ron. Take charge of them both!
Good to see you back, I was thinking it might never happen. Good luck with the regular updates.
Hey there. I just saw the new chapter and took it as an opportunity to reread the whole story. Still a very enjoyable read. :-)
Mostly I post this to address some of what you said in your author notes though. Specifically that some (many?) people want the sex to be delivered quicker. The vast majority of porn on the net is just like that, quick to the action with at best a little bit of plot or character introduction. Finding a story like yours, one with solid erotic content that is still first and foremost an actual story, is relatively rare and always a joy for me. Especially one that explores the kinkier sides of sexual relationships.
So thank you very much for the time and effort you are putting into this and please continue to be awesome. :-)
Okay, chapter 1 was great.
seriously - when do we see the first pregnant girl/woman blessed by Ron's "gift"
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