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Reviews for Vivo o Rio part 3: nightlife and the locals

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From IttyBittySkitty on December 10, 2018

    *actually died and went to heaven because of this*

    THAT WAS THE HOTTEST FUCKING THING IVE EVER READ GOD FUCK


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  • From lycan on July 20, 2013
    Finally a story with Ulrich and Aelita, but other parts were really good to.
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  • From AyaHime on July 12, 2013
    Well written as always. You even researched about the drinks... XD
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  • From ANON - Lemonreader94 on July 02, 2013
    This was super hot dude! It was worth the wait!
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  • From ANON - L on June 29, 2013
    That was really one of your best yet. I'm glad you remembered Yumi still wanting to get pregnant and just stuck to anal with her. I can't wait for your next one, and I hope you do one chapter where they have a group sex at the house and for fun, they pass Carla around like a toy. I look forward to the carnival one with the costumes. I can only imagine what you'll do next after this Rio fic.

    - Master Doom Maker.
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  • From ANON - ninjacook on June 29, 2013
    I like reading your stories because they have a good plot. Also because lately you've made an effort to include everyone and in this one you did two pairings that you haven't done before. It's really good keep up these stories where everyone is included. Nice job also on making Jeremy seem a little more relax on his moral standards without him being totally out of character. I look forward to the next part when that comes out. I hope it's a group orgy with everyone. Look forward to reviewing the next part. It's worth the wait when you do multiple lemons in one story.
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on June 29, 2013
    Well, I can finally understand why this one took so long m8. Its because you had to write four seperate lemons instead of just one. But you know something? They were all perfect. As I have come to expect of you. And I fully expect more of the club and more of Carla in the future. In closinf, I have only one thing to say;
    Vivo o Rio!!!
    JMAHWK
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on June 28, 2013
    as with all of your other Code Lyoko oneshots; loved it ;)
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  • From ANON - Rillis on June 28, 2013
    I don't know how, but U made a Emily X Jeremie! The most hard to work with lemon-wise, and it worked! You are a lemony God!
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