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Reviews for Vivo o Rio part 2: breaking in the vacation house

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From IttyBittySkitty on December 10, 2018

    *has been drooling the whole time reading that, both from my mouth and my groin*

    oh...my...god...

    WHY THE HELL DID YOU NEVER DO ANOTHER ONE LIKE THIS???

    THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT AND IT FLOWED SO FICKING WELL!!!

     

    Promise me you’ll do something like this again!!

    ibts


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  • From AyaHime on May 18, 2013
    Reading this makes me proud of being from there [pretty much]... Y'know, the story is kinda rushed, but hey? You fit 4 lemons in one and made it work! Perfect! And I still wanna know what else you know about us :3
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  • From ANON - ninjacook on May 15, 2013
    Great work as always. Love reading your code LYOKO stories. Glad you include all couples in this story. Also I like how you changed up how Aelita and Jeremy had sex. I hope the group orgy will come out in the next 2 months or so. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on May 14, 2013
    Well, looks like the group is having fun :)
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  • From ANON - Rillis on May 14, 2013
    aside from a few spelling errors this was another great chapter. How many chapters are you planning on?
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  • From Lemonreader93 on May 13, 2013
    dude that was great, you sir are a perverted genius ;)
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on May 13, 2013
    Two words. Holy Hell. Thank you, you rule. This story has just taken first for hottest you have ever written, as well as my new personal favorite. I cant wait for your next story, and I really cant wait for your next Rio chapter.
    JMAHWK
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on May 13, 2013
    loved. it ;)
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