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Reviews for The Itch

By : Demon_Casket
  • From KingEdward on June 11, 2015
    nice
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  • From ANON - james on April 25, 2015
    I feel the whole romance thing was pretty good kinda feel you messed it up with pepermen butlers master thing don't get me wrong I like that type thing but it just doesn't fit this stories which is pretty aswome by the say I hope you go back to the love with bubblegum and Finn maybe make it harem type thing but this is my honest opinion thanks for reading

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  • From bigherb81 on December 09, 2013
    Man after reading both of them I want you to do the second one and have Finn come though and beat Peppermint butlers ass with his demon blood sword! I mean make it a little exciting or hell have be a sex off, but ultimately it'd be awesome to see Finn bring the hurt to that chump. Loved both endings though can't wait to see which you choose, or how you wrap this.
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  • From ANON - Awolfx9 on December 08, 2013
    I liked the Alternate ending alot, you should consider making another story with evil Peppermint Butler because I really like the idea of PB being nothing more than a mindless sex slave :3
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  • From Christopher11 on December 02, 2013
    Great new chapter to the story. The new 'evil Peppermint Butler!' storyline might be one to consider expanding.
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  • From ANON - Brewer235 on November 27, 2013
    ;v; oh my god. that was amazing. thank you for the update I cant wait to see how this amazing story ends.
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  • From ANON - Brewer235 on November 04, 2013
    UPDATE SOON!!! THE WAIT IS KILLING ME X,o
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  • From ANON - brewer235 on September 22, 2013
    Great addition to the chapter! I cant wait for Pb to just snap and ravage Fin Lol.
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  • From ANON - brewer235 on September 14, 2013
    Please update ASAP Xo I have been waiting soo long for the next chapter. Its amazing!
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  • From ANON - Persianlady on July 04, 2013
    I honestly think you should continue with this story! This is one of the few good lemon kinky story I honsetly want to read over again!
    Are you also going to upload this to fanfiction.net btw?
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  • From ANON - brewer235 on June 26, 2013
    great chapter. you should update more often lol. But I really do love this story
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  • From bigherb81 on May 22, 2013
    Nice filler I believe that should hold me until the next full installment. Can't wait to see if Boni and Marci get to take out their angry sexual frustration out on Finn.
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  • From bigherb81 on May 15, 2013
    You dirty tease! A beautiful woman and two nymphs playing with themselves and you end it!? Nice. Also I forgot that Bonni and Marci are sorta friends nice spin there. I am curious about the Flame Princess thing but I'm guessing Finn may not make it to flame kingdom. Or he might guess its just wait and see.
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  • From ANON - LurkMoar on May 15, 2013
    There's not many harem story's involving Finn on sites like these, and I'd really like it if you did just that.

    Anyways, 1000 internets to you or making this IC so far!
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  • From ANON - Alpha G. on May 14, 2013
    It's official (at least according to me), this is the best Adventure Time Lemon ever! I can't wait for the moment when Finn have a threesome with both PB and Marceline. Although are you going to make this a harem story as well? Because I certainly hope you do.
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