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Reviews for Basement Dale

By : TimedWatcher
  • From ANON - Jeb on March 05, 2019

    I feel bad that I was laughing at this story. I guess I have some sort of sick morbid curiosity. Needs a part 5. I want to see if they get caught.


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  • From ANON - JackTorrance42 on October 22, 2018

    I have some suggestions:

    1. Introduce the characters, don't just throw their names in

    2. More details in the sex scenes

    3. Make the scenes flow better

     

    Other than that, it's pretty good! if you want, I am willing to help with it. 


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  • From FartucusMaximus on June 18, 2017

    Very interesting and well written, looking forwards to what else may happen to poor Connie, mayhaps dales wife joining in?


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  • From Aysha on March 19, 2013
    Wow, I feel the same way as your first review, but this does seem like the kind of thing Dale would do.
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on March 19, 2013
    um wow...i don't know if i should want to keep reading this or just walk away....good story either way
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