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Reviews for Ensuring Discipline

By : hummerhouse
  • From LexiC-on1990 on September 24, 2023

    ...okay... wow...

    This was an incredible read!!! 


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  • From Wrightmother on January 24, 2016
    I loved this. I liked how you pointed out how it can be a very lonely existence for the turtles being as they are the only ones of their species and all male to. They wouldn't be able to have babies with human females, so once they are gone, they are gone. No children to carry on with their legacy. It was only natural for Donnie to feel comforted by Leo's intimacy in the end.
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  • From ANON - Ravenshell on December 30, 2014
    This was fantastic. Warped, but fantastic. Very emotionally-driven. I am in love with and envy your use of vocabulary. Hope to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - InnocenceKept on December 25, 2013
    This story left my heart twisted in shambles of feels, and I mean that in the best way possible. You captured Donny's intellect very well while still giving him emotions and making him seem human. The ending had me near tears with how he was conflicted between happy he got his Leo back yet finding himself missing some of the affection the other Leo showed him. And just... gah my fucking feels! lol One of my favorite fics.
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  • From ANON - Horacio on March 11, 2013
    Not only was this a great read, but it was a poignant and, in some ways, harrowing story that gripped me from the start. The description of the story did not do it justice, in my opinion. The style and quality of writing was excellent and helped to convey the character's feelings to immerse the reader in the universe. I like how you released clues as to the outcome of the story at different intervals, it kept me guessing as to what would happen.

    I can't help but feel empathetic for Leonardo in the later chapters, even though he is described as insane (without spoiling the plot). His and Donatello's interaction in the penultimate chapters shows an intimacy I didn't expect from this story, but was pleasantly suprised. The ending to the story was ultimately satisfying, I especially enjoyed reading the rekindling of the three brother's bond in the last chapter as well as the heart-to-heart between Leo and Don.

    Overall, I think this was a fantastic piece of fiction and I thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it. I, for one, would look forward to a continuation (if it was announced). That is the mark of a great story in my opinion, kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - Selaniel on February 27, 2013
    Thank you for finishing the story.
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  • From ANON - anon on February 22, 2013
    Wow, the last part is very emotional and well done. Though the TBC makes me wonder if the fic will be longer than it looks.
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  • From ANON - AlishaDarling on February 12, 2013
    I really started reading this out of curiosity. I remember Ninja Turtles way back in the 80's :) I actually like this story a lot, it's pretty messed up but it's interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Whysteria on February 11, 2013
    I am just loving this story. Shame on me lol I am so excited to see how the story continues, I'm dying to know how it'll end
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  • From ANON - sabaku_lotus on February 07, 2013
    This is like watching a car wreak. Its fucked up but I want to see what happens.

    I was like "reading this on a dare," and damn it gives me feels. Still.....its fucked up. Nothing else to say. 4 stars for that and how IC it is for being fucked up. I get no kink from this outside of mind screwing myself. Good writing but fucked up concept.

    I....will finish reading this and hope it doesn't ruin my childhood anymore.
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  • From ANON - Anomaly on February 06, 2013
    This is quite interesting actualy. Curious to know what actualy happened the Leonardo.
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