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Reviews for Coming Between Twins

By : FairySlayer
  • From ANON - Big Brother on October 09, 2015
    This fic is simply amazing. One of the best stories on this site. Really cool.

    Wendy loves twincest, hehe.

    I would love to read a sequel.
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  • From ANON - MildTacoSauce on August 13, 2015
    Great story you have here!!! I ship WenDip a ton, but I've got my soft spot for Pinecest, as well as Wenbel! So a three way between all of them, sounds good to me! I'm not sure if you plan a sequel to this story, but I would look forwards to one! Keep up the good work!
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  • From GeorgeGlass on July 18, 2013
    I'd really like to know how someone I've never met has managed to write a GRAVITY FALLS story that contains absolutely everything I could ever want such a story to contain. I love the humor, the strange blend of innocence and wickedness that drives the twins to force themselves on Wendy, the passion among all three of them...it's intense in all the right ways. I'm very nearly shaking from reading it. Thank you for writing this and sharing it.
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  • From ANON - Yustax on July 17, 2013
    This is perhaps the hottest fic I have read in adultfanfiction. Your style didn't leave any detail unexplored, and the interaction between the characters made me want to read more. I hope you do a sequel.
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  • From MrPunch1 on December 10, 2012
    There we go, I read it and I'll give you my thoughts. Keep in mind that I'm not as thorough as you :-)

    I can see that this is a part of a greater effort from many authors so I'll stick to what I know and take the plot in strides for obvious reasons. There is a peculiar feeling that I get when I read stories that deal with hypnotism or control, no matter the shape it takes. Reading your story brought about interesting ideas and emotions in me, which personally I enjoy and look for in all writing. The associations which arise from reading are the fuel that keeps me enjoying other peoples work. Thus this review is subjective rather than one focusing on grammar or structure. It's also woefully short.

    A magical item (in this case a pumpkin) is a classic device to bring people together, though I think it was actually Wendy herself that acted as a bridge between the twins, bringing them together after their initial squabble by accident. Her being the center of their attention was something I considered natural, as well as her reluctance to actually use her strength even under such a predicament. The gentle submission of this redheaded girl who didn't want to harm the kids even when they acted in such a way that she understood things were beyond normal was delicious and erotic, but above all it made me certain that a part of her wanted it to happen. Later on my suspicion was confirmed, particularly when Wendy broke down and told them how eager she was to see Dipper and Mabel together. This displayed her inner thoughts quite plainly, even more plainly than the sex itself.

    The whole show that the twins did for Wendy after subduing her was very well written and hot, and the threesome itself even more so. The highlight for me was when she helped them join together like good brother and sister, and her comment in the end leaves an open ground for more stories to come. Likewise the implication that Mabel and Dipper had certain experiences together was very sweet and made me d'aww like a girl, which is in itself a joy. There is much more to be written on the subject of twincest in any case.

    The descriptions were great and the style appeals to me. I see you put quite a bit of work into it and I can appreciate that, and judging from the size of your opus you've been doing this for a while so that's understandable. I hope you'll one day do a pure Mabel/Dipper fic so that Wendy can catch a little break and relax. Bottom line is I enjoyed the story and I hope to read more of your work once our interests overlap once more.

    Have a nice day/night in the meantime and try not to anger any cats. They're vicious and crafty little devils.

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