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Reviews for Transformers Prime The Truth Revealed

By : Aysha
  • From Wapath on June 21, 2017

    Hello I don't know if your reading this ,but please finish it.People are still reading even today.So please I ask you no I order you to finish it.Also, I made this account to send.Have a nice day.


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  • From ANON - renatamer on November 30, 2016

    please! oh god please finish this story!


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  • From ANON - Sten on June 01, 2016
    Please make more I'd like to see arcee and jack give their child siblings
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  • From ANON - Sten on May 16, 2016
    I loved this please tell me there's more banging of arcee and meeting the human Cybertron man hybrid, a little 3way jack arcee jacks mom😈
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  • From ANON - Sten on May 16, 2016
    I loved this please tell me there's more banging of arcee and meeting the human Cybertron man hybrid
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  • From ANON - ton on April 23, 2016
    Update your story its too cool to leave hanging
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  • From ANON - Wes on March 28, 2016
    This story has been one of the better fanfixs I've read. It's great to see them written by such talented ametuer authors( no insult intended). The story started out as if it could have been a jack/arcee sex oneshot but you added so much more with your story. You had a lot of great sex scenes, don't get me wrong but how you integrated the drama flowed nicely, it wasn't forced. I was also taken back when part of I think chapter 3 or 4 was a bunch of sci-fi tech talk ice never actually read in a fanfic before, that was integrated nicely rather than leaving us with an explanation like " just accept it and move on". You also made barely any grammatical mistakes too. I tend to give some leeway when it comes to that cause sometimes it seems common place, but I've read some like every word was an abbreviated slang of the word and that's annoying. I really enjoyed how you've been telling the story and I agree with some of the other comments that the baby should be a hybrid like the one from transformers animated at least similar scientifically speaking. You have a great talent in writing and it be a shame if you stopped at chapter 4 . it has been a couple years since you lasted updated it but I did see it's been a few months since you last edited it so I know you haven't forgotten about this story. I know sometimes it's hard when life can get in the way if hobbies like this but a release of chapter5 soon would be most appreciative for every. But you do have a good skill with erittingvand it's always nice to see that in fanfics. I hope you at least consider a career in writtingbcause u have a talent. But I am rambling now...so...just keep up the good work andbi hope to see ch5 soon.
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  • From ANON - TFPLOVER on February 21, 2016
    wowww these stories are really good, well done on creating them dude, keep spicing up the sex because your doing well at introducing new stuff and not making it boring. if bulkhead and arcee had sex that would be pretty weird personally, not something i would enjoy reading. however jack and june is great nice one on that! when is chapter 5 coming out??
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  • From ANON - Chut on February 20, 2016
    Good stuff !
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  • From ANON - Chut on February 19, 2016
    Insane storyline is all i can say to that 5* from me
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  • From ViktornovaMk2 on May 25, 2015
    This is a good story. It could be a great story with a little bit of editing.
    First thing I want to comment, no-one has mentioned Fowler dropping his sat-phone in the protogon. Stop and think about the two major issues with that. Military Satellite Uplink w/ the encryption keys and passwords, and Internet access.
    Second comment, I REALLY hope that the protoform is a girl and NOT Sari.
    Third, As far as the Cons learning about procreation, PredaKing and Airachnid. And don't turn Spider-bot into a proto-factory, no-one deserves that, not even her.
    As far as Jack's mortality goes, dying Jack meets the Forge of Solus Prime. Deus ex Machina indeed.
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  • From DragonBorn83 on April 22, 2015
    I love this story, and to an extent it makes sense, I wish it was more complete, the way it ends leaves us hanging.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2014
    OH please, oh please, keep writing more, for this story is just the story that I wanted to read for a while now, though you think that you can add in a bit where Arcee is either in a Pretender body, or get shrunk down to Jake's size just to spice things up a bit.
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  • From HenshinDaisuke on December 21, 2013
    Feels like ages since you wrote anything, totally worth the wait though. Love the story and hope to see more soon.
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  • From Belfry on December 08, 2013
    Very impressed with your story. You handled the feelings between Jack and June very well. Mothers have their sexual needs, and now that they have Crossed the Lines, Jack will have to think of June as both his mother and his lover. How long can he keep both his mother and Arcee happy?

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