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Reviews for Strawberry's Berry Special Summer

By : TheEvilFaery
  • From alexjasper2006 on November 25, 2023

    Please pleas epleaseeeeee another chapter!!!!! As someone who enjoys this series and had a crush on all the girls I enjoyed this!


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  • From FairySlayer on September 23, 2012
    (I was proofreader/beta, but still...)

    No matter how many times I re-read (or re-listen) to the story I just love it, and I keep finding new meanings (even if only in my head after the fact – the Epimetheus effect).

    First off, I'm glad you rejected my suggestion to play it out as a police drama. ;) The girls were definitely very much in-character, less that one area where we suspend disbelief to understand how a society dominated by girls deals with romance and sex. The opening where she's writing her law ahv ;) letter to Blueberry Muffin explains that they're dating, and more, and that Strawberry is having to deal with having her lover so far away. Then what happens next seems pretty natural instead of just out-of-the-blue PWP.

    Regardless of the display Angel Cake gave her, and especially the enticement to give a hands (and mouth) on demonstration even after Ginger Snap's running away made sense to me. I guess the narcissistic girl couldn't stand the fact that her admirer seemed to be pulling away and wanted to prove, to Strawberry and to herself, that she's still got it. Man, I can't imagine the willpower the redhead summoned to extract herself, but knowing that Ginger Snap was upset plus strangeness of the situation (which I think I finally just figured out above) certainly helped. Also, I have to imaging that something is gnawing away at Strawberry Shortcake's happiness whenever her friends are in trouble.

    Ginger Snap's reactions seemed perfect, like running away and trying to hide, then sputtering and stumbling over trying to explain her "cheating" (great job holding it together for those few seconds, Strawberry) and secret desires. Of course she was right about Angel Cake's problematic ego and how it could have gotten in the way. So Strawberry made sure to bring in someone relatively new and unexpected to help with the issue, a surrogate so to speak, whose inexperience would also give Angel Cake a bit of a chance to show off. The blonde never did get her chance to "taste something sweet" even if it wasn't directly from Strawberry.

    There was also something cool in how Strawberry was willing to give so much pleasure to her closest friends (and some really steamy workup for their relatively new acquaintance, but only to do a little proofing before Angel Cake turned up the heat in the kitchen of love), but for her own pleasure she relied only on herself. I wonder if that was totally intentional (and why she got Angel Cake to partake of other fruit) so that she wouldn't really be cheating on Blueberry Muffin, especially since that's whom she was thinking of only before she was able to find her own powerful sexual release.

    And of course she had to share all of that with Blueberry Muffin. Perhaps to let the brunette know the fun she was missing while also making sure her girlfriend understood that she wasn't so sad and lonely without her – that Blueberry could enjoy her trip without guilt or cut her trip short. Even if Strawberry does eventually get herself on the receiving end of some special attentions I'm sure Blueberry wouldn't mind, and maybe it's almost expected that at some point the other girls would "strongly insist" on showing their appreciation for all that she's done for them.

    At the very least it would calm her down and, while they're all dazed in the afterglow, give Strawberry a chance to recruit the other girls to help set up Blueberry's coming home party. Even Peppermint Fizz could be convinced to share some of her ingredients. No matter what though, that's going to be one juicin' jumping jamberry! of a party, I'm sure. :)



    (No one from Porcupine Peak will be invited, I'm guessing, so definitely no Piecest. And while I loathe asking for authors to add little things to their stories in progress, I'd be pleased as pineapple punch if Huck wasn't totally left out of the fun. After all, I think another fanfic set up a few themes that could be incorporated...)

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  • From RandomRedneck on August 29, 2012
    Dang man, that was pretty good. Like how you kept the cheesy berry lingo and whatnot in there too. Nice job.
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