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Reviews for Crossed Lines

By : Belfry
  • From ANON - on July 17, 2016

    This is a magnificent story will there be a new chapter?


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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 20, 2016
    Very good story. Got sad also when he erased sissy's memory.
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  • From Edward_or_Ford on May 24, 2015
    Regarding Chapter 120, you are very welcome, and thank you for your invitation to me to provide my input to your story. I look forward to incorporating this cameo into a future story of my own. Someday!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2015
    Cool! I love how you show how Mary and Jillian have different views of the same situation. Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Irish on January 06, 2015
    This may be one of the best story's I have ever read. The twists and turns not only kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time but always wanting to read more. I read Johnny and the limit and I get where you were coming from but Vic elors story does yours no justice. I like his but you really outdid yourself here with an amazing piece of literature. This is the type of story that could be made into a movie and would be a cult classic in my opinion. I honestly hope you pick this one back up because it has such potential to keep going and I don't think any person could write it the right way but you. This was a story with a plot that was given much thought and I say amazing job.
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  • From toojacktastic on October 01, 2014
    Really enjoy this story. Keep them coming
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  • From ANON - Ea4g on July 30, 2014
    Great story. You must write more.
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  • From ANON - hahsekr on May 18, 2014
    in chapter 11 IT IS SUZAN going psyco not marry
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  • From Christopher11 on April 06, 2014
    Okay, latest chapter needs more exposition on how they got to the point where Mary died and Vegadon apparently had something bad happen to it. The story was good until then but then it seemed to get a little..... broken, like something was missing.

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  • From ANON - Harem lover on March 21, 2014
    I hope the girls will stay with Jonny and go back with him to that alien world as royal harem girls. I know Jillian offered something like that before she changed history.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2014
    I like the way you added Doctor Who to the story. As being one of Susan and mary's teachers. Please update soon.
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  • From Harem-Lover-26 on January 18, 2014
    could you add a flash back to the Lila Hugh and Jonny threesome. It sounds hot
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  • From ANON - hot shot on January 15, 2014
    Asome chapters been a wile but love the last update will see what you come up with in the future keep them coming love how you made this fic keep it up
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  • From ANON - Robert Byrd on January 15, 2014
    I like the way you told what everyone was feeling and thinking. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on December 22, 2013
    Wow talk about what you can see well there's that now what will his mother do next keep them coming
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