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Reviews for Crossed Lines

By : Belfry
  • From ANON - hot shot on June 06, 2013
    Wow talk about a bomb what will Mari do and what other secrets will come out hope to see more soon keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 31, 2013
    Wow asome chapter love the part were Lila and husband are tring to figure out what to do and what kind of secret do they have hope to see more keep it up
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  • From lightner2000 on May 24, 2013
    great story so far please do not let it become a dead story.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 24, 2013
    Wow well jonny help her feel much better but still what will Lila and her husban do now that they realize it was no dream well keep them coming can't wait to see what happened next
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2013
    I like the way you had Johnny ask for Gil not to be executed. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ROBBIE BYRD on May 21, 2013
    I like the way you had Johnny help Jillian.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 21, 2013
    Wow wonder what will Lila do now and what will happend to gill and this fic its getting better hope to see more
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 18, 2013
    Wow what plans will jonny come up with and what will dark veagan do hope to see more keep it coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 18, 2013
    Wow wonder what will Susan and Mary think when they find out that gill was soo snicky to do that to Jill what will be his punishment and what will there parents do when they find out what happendkeep them coming
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2013
    Gil druged jillian so I would say that it was rape if he didnt drug her she wouldnt have tought Gil was Johnny so its rape end of story Gil needs 2 die by rape
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  • From ANON - Christopher on May 10, 2013
    A good story, but I didn't like the bash against lawyers in the latest chapter and harsh punishments for all crimes do NOT cut down on the crime rate, they just encourage criminals to kill witnesses to their crimes. That's been proven many times in the past.

    Also, what Gil did is nowhere near being rape in the slightest and I hope he gets off in a future chapter.
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 06, 2013
    Wow what will happen now that this hapen what efects will gills mistake have on the test family keep them coming
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  • From Argofirestone on May 06, 2013
    I am really enjoying this story, good work, keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 04, 2013
    Wow wonder what's going to happen with gill and what about jonny and his family can't wait to see keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on May 03, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming its getting exsating can't wait to see what happened next keep them coming
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