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Reviews for Crossed Lines

By : Belfry
  • From ANON - hot shot on August 24, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming she's pregnant I wonder how her dad will take it and if she will tell jonny about it and what other stuff will happend keep it up
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  • From ANON - hot shot on August 13, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming especially the ending part of the chapter hope to see more soon keep it up
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  • From ANON - hot shot on August 09, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming wonder what else can happend next keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on July 31, 2013
    Wow poor dog next time he may ha e to come up with a better plan asome update hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - hot shot on July 23, 2013
    Wow didn't see that coming love this chapter hope to see more soon keep them coming
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  • From ANON - hot shot on July 14, 2013
    Wow asome chapter love the small plot hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - hot shot on July 08, 2013
    Asome update love the reason you gave keep them coming
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  • From vic_elor on July 08, 2013
    Phoenix Wright... lol
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  • From ANON - hot shot on June 24, 2013
    Wow I love the set up you have for this chapter a small brake but well worth it keep them coming hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - hot shot on June 15, 2013
    Wow now that this is happening wonder what will happend next keep them coming love drama do far
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  • From ANON - hot shot on June 12, 2013
    Wow dint see that coming that was a total shoker toy put there love how it came out especially when Mary added all the dots and figure who jonny's twin was can't wait to see what you come up with keep them coming
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  • From Darkon on June 11, 2013
    I agree with Christiopher, your little revelation that Johnny and Sissy are brother and sister was a total bombshell. Sure, they look a lot alike, and they both have that devil-may-care attitude, but it never once dawned on me that they might be related. To use a line from the show, I didn't see that one coming, heh.
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on June 10, 2013
    I like the way you added the surprise about Johnny & Sissy being twins. Please update soon.
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  • From Christopher11 on June 10, 2013
    Okay... awesome latest chapter to the story. After reading "Test Family Secrets Part 2", I actually went...... BONG! Jaw hit the ground!
    I was not expecting the 'adoptive twist' to the story in the slightest nor that Sissy, who Johnny has boned, is his sister.

    Oh man.... Johnny is going to have to give his parents a wakeup call in the next chapter and I'm waiting with baited breath to see how they are going to get out of THIS mess.
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  • From Darkon on June 09, 2013
    I get the distinct impression that you've slowed down on updating your story because you feel it's no longer getting six tons of reviews every chapter. If that's correct, then I feel that it's necessary to tell you that a slower review flow at this stage could be a flattering thing. I like to think when a story's 60+ chapters along and it isn't getting reviews out the wazoo like it used to, it means that your readers think your work is effectively flawless. I certainly don't think your story needs any improvement, and that's why I haven't given you any real input for months. And yes, I have been faithfully waiting for EVERY NEW CHAPTER.

    Your story's far too good to let up on it now. You can't be dissuaded just because you think nobody is paying it any attention, especially when your hits counter says otherwise.
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