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Reviews for The Bachelor Party

By : Jade_Max
  • From captainrexbest35 on May 28, 2012
    i was drooling so much i could barely work the mouse or the scroll bar. that was amazingly sexy. made me horny
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  • From NakedClones on April 27, 2012
    A pure sensuous delight! Loved this story from the first delicious word to the last! So amazing that you could tell so much in a story without dialogue! Great to see Commander Cody getting out and letting his hair down, so to speak. The hottest part about this story was the way everything was in mirror action. Makes me think I need to get a mirror, or two, for my bedroom! Clone romance at it's hottest!
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  • From laloga13 on April 26, 2012
    Whew! What a ride! Erm...yeah. :p

    Anyway, loved the absence of dialog throughout - it made for a really intense, striking scene, especially when coupled with the fragmented, almost stream-of-consciousness style in some portions; it *felt* like I was getting swept away by the narrative, right along with the characters.

    The Zeltrons' use of the veils, slowly uncovering themselves, was amazing, and I loved the fact that you wove in the heady influence of pheromones and alcohol. (And the fact that Fives and Echo totally knew what was coming! Naughty boys. :P)

    Like everyone else, I thoroughly enjoyed the mirror imagery, particularly when the boys got going and refused to allow their role to be purely passive, and even more particularly when everything came to a head, as it were, at once; also, it was *beyond* sexy to have Cody watching Fives, thinking of himself and what was happening to him.

    Small thing that caught my eye: "First Brother," instead of Best Man. Love! It suits the clones so well! :D (Might have to borrow that term. :P)
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  • From rabbitwriter on April 26, 2012
    Hrrrrrrr.......this was FABULOUS, hon!!! LOVED IT! *fans self* Whew....after yesterday's little procedure, this ah...made for some interesting reading indeed. o.O LOVED the "mirror" concept you wove into this. And as for dialogue? I think this was absolutely perfect. In fact, I think including dialogue would have changed this....it's so much more intense, I think, without it. Fabulous present, indeed. THANK YOU!!! ^^ Oh....and Fives is SUCH an instigator. LOL Love it.
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  • From serendip on April 26, 2012
    I love the mirror image idea! Hot, hot, hot. And those Zeltron girls are hot too. Cody is my favorite! Looks like s great party, lol ;-)
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