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Reviews for Sexy Bits

By : CanadianGirl
  • From Jessup on September 19, 2011
    First, I want to say that I've enjoyed Sexy Bits. It's quality lemon fic, with sweet Maiko romance, like your other submissions here, and is a cut above the usual stuff posted here on AFF.

    Yet I feel like you're running in place with your lemons. Don't get me wrong, what you do you do very well, but there's a sameness to all your fics that's becoming apparent. The set-up for your stories is always post-canon Maiko. I think you should open yourself up to other scenarios for Maiko; not necessarily radical AUs or anything, but even just stories that take place before the end of canon. Like Maiko when they're still enemies, or when Zuko is still exiled pre-Aang's return -- missing scenes, as it were. Something to spice up your stories, because the sameness in scenario between all your fics is, for me as a reader, undercutting the enjoyment of the romance and sex.
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