Reviews for HeatBy : Aspergirl |
Even with the tag, I was not expecting the violence of that rape scene given the way you started the story with silliness between Red Menace and Voltar.
You definitely shocked me with the dichotomy.
I have a question though: you end the second chapter with Frogg about to exact is revenge on Dommageddon, yet you've marked the story complete. Were you planning on a continuation, or were you ending this in classic horror film style, leaving the gruesome details up to the reader? If the second, you certainly accomplished it.
This was a well-written darkfic. Thank you for sharing.
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