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Reviews for Carrots

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  • From ANON - jeff on November 08, 2016

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  • From FairySlayer on June 30, 2011
    Chapter 2:

    Somehow I knew it was going there, if you know what I mean, and it was certainly a great scene in itself. It was also sweet how Fluttershy could be a bit more assertive yet still keep her charm about her until Pinkie Pie realized she was supposed to play along. And it as great that she did, especially suddenly being overtaken with her lust like she would with any other emotion, in her Pinkie Pie way. She certainly was direct about what she wanted once she started to get into it, never quite turning herself over completely to Fluttershy's control, though considering that the pegasus wasn't experienced it made sense that she'd need instruction and encouragement.

    Fortunately, once things got rolling Fluttershy didn't hesitate to work Pinkie and herself again.

    The ending got a little bit silly, but at least it was cute. I half expected Mr. Pie to show up wondering why Pinkie hadn't returned, but it's likely he's used to her getting distracted. Still, it was a lot of fun along with being cute and sexy.

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2011
    Well done. Will you make more (please)?
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  • From FairySlayer on April 16, 2011
    This was a really good first step into the realm of lemons. Even if there was no major "plot" it certainly had a reason and fell into place very believably. It started nicely enough with Fluttershy's own embarrassment just being alone, but it was super cute when Pinkie Pie showed up and didn't show any bit of surprise.

    I think they fell into each other naturally. Pinkie Pie treating sex as normal as enjoying a pastry made Fluttershy feel more at ease than the typical, "It's a normal thing for a filly your age" type thing that others may have said when she got embarrassed. It was a great way to catch Fluttershy off-guard once she was beyond the point of no return and Pinkie could move in for the thrill.

    The bit about Dash's gift video to her friends made me smile for a few reasons. Is it just a way to make her orientation clear (which wasn't mentioned), show off, or even as an "advertisement" if any of the others may be interested. :)

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  • From Bishonen on April 02, 2011
    This was good other than the fact than the anatomy being kinda of odd I liked this glad to see some pony yuri here and Fluttershy is the best.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2011
    Pinkie's not a slut.
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