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Reviews for Quotient

By : DeusExProcella
  • From ANON - Kai Walker on March 03, 2012
    Like many readers, I was scrolling through the story thinking "where's the smut. Wheres the smut?". But then I really read the story, and let this play in the background
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYPPs7cA3Oc

    It came alive for me. You did a really good job putting this story together. My only suggestion would be to make better use of dialogue tags so I know who is saying what. Remember, for every new POV, make a new paragraph.

    I loved the unfusing...it was heart breaking. And the epilogue was very touching in more ways than one. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Joseph on June 07, 2011
    I loved this. The idea of it. How when two entirely different people become one, a perfect unity, no one fighting for control just peace. And then taking that feeling away from them. Making them feel lost and alone without that feeling of being together! Fantastique! Are you going to continue this?!
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  • From ANON - Xander on February 28, 2011
    That was amazing. Love the DBZ reference. Really wish Blossycup would've stuck around, but ah well.
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  • From SkySan27 on February 26, 2011
    Aside from the random "—"'s all over the place, this was a good story. I was hoping to see all three girls suddenly together, or just have Blossycup stick around. I honestly felt that you rushed the ending, that you broke apart Blossycup when you actually didn't need to. So what if some of their old friends wanted Blossom and Buttercup back. To hell with them. Just regular civilians, nonsense characters that helped build up part of the emotional plot. This feels like a one shot, so I doubt there will be another chapter, but alas. Had to share. Really wish you hadn't broken apart Blossycup.
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