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Reviews for It's the Wrought That Counts

By : FairySlayer
  • From ANON - yvmora on July 25, 2011
    This story is wonderfully in character and the dialogue is perfect. I could actually see this playing out in my mind! If you added a letter to Princess Celestia at the end I would have thought it was an actual episode of the series. Your portrayal of Spike, as wise beyond his years, is very poignant. Apple Jack actually finding the book "interestin" and Pinkie Pie's line were brilliant!
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  • From bloodravyn on December 26, 2010
    aww!
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  • From BoredStraight on December 20, 2010
    I used to LOVE My Little Pony!! This was so cute!
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  • From ApolloImperium on December 19, 2010
    Aw! It's cute!!! And I love the twist, that they just didn't wanna make the dragon upset! *giggles*
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  • From Shadowknight12 on December 19, 2010
    Hah, what a sweet story. I think you're very good with characterization and plot, especially since readers utterly unfamiliar with the cartoon (such as me) can still get a pretty good idea of the characters' personalities. I particularly enjoyed the ending, since it was a very unexpected twist. And the extra twist at the very last line, which stated that yes, the books were interesting after all. The distress was very well portrayed and there were a lot of nifty details thrown in. I am very pleased by how the story flows. It's very easy to get lost in it and just read it all the way to the end in one go.
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  • From JayDee on December 19, 2010
    I, uh, I never thought I'd read a My Little Pony fanfiction. It was weird enough reading the Something Positive strips with the evil queen pony. Glad I did though because those book titles were pretty great - some of them sound like things I'd want to read. "Spooky Tales of Spontaneous Meteorology" in particular could be a NY Times bestseller :D

    So far as the plot, it was pretty cool how she got back and they liked the gifts. Happy ending! I suspect there's even more humor in the choice of titles for people familiar with the characters?
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  • From pittwitch on December 18, 2010
    Awwwww, all WAFF from you too? What has come over the AFF crowd this week? Some sort of spirit no doubt! I loved the way Spike was the protagonist! And the book titles were PERFECT! Great job dear, and as always, thanks for sharing! PW
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2010
    Silly ponies... books are the BEST gifts! And how sweet of Spike to get so overwrought... the best gift of all!
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