Click Here!

Reviews for The Middleton Pact - Redux

By : fulwiz123
  • From 2CRsgt on July 15, 2010
    I wonder if the ninja will try to get Ron and Joss "involved" with each other so that they would be less likely to interfer with Yamanouchi's plans for world conquest. Also getting Ron that vacent seat on the concol will practally garentee a "blow-up/ of ex-BF-GF type" that will prevent anything from being done by the meeting.
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on July 14, 2010
    I don't blame wade for saveing that vid and i really don't blame him for putting it away so well and loved the orgey at the end lookig forward to more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on July 13, 2010
    Great new chapter looking forwrad to more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on July 09, 2010
    Really like this story and naked skdiveing sounds like it could be.....intresting

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From RWO on July 09, 2010
    i really thought that joss was going to go with kim's team, but, i do remember the series... she went all nuts over ron.
    Report Review

  • From 2CRsgt on July 02, 2010
    More, what can I say?
    Report Review

  • From on July 02, 2010
    Ah, so Kim has finally figured out that there is a 'plot' going on here. I wouldn't be surprised if someone was manipulating the Pact Council and Bonnie as well, in order for some nefarious scheme. I doubt it's Wade, he's been pretty helpful and hasn't shown any real 'evil' tendencies. Sensei and Yori? Possible, but even with them, this seems beyond their ability to manipulate. A great new chapter, and the thing about Kim being turned into a Monkey again... priceless!
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on June 20, 2010
    Really loveingthis and can't wait to see what happens at the party and also i love mother/daughter syuff so really hope Kim does more with her mom.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on June 17, 2010
    Great new chapter and i loved what Ned asked really looking forward to the next one.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Christopher on June 17, 2010
    A good story and another great chapter to the story. Kinda surprised me that Ron did the whole 'sneaky' thing with Kim. As I have pointed out to people, there are different kinds of villians. Villians who try to kill as many people as they can, villians who avoid killing people, etc.
    They are not all 'equal' in badness.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tomo on June 17, 2010
    loved it, looking forward to more
    Report Review

  • From Manofevil on June 12, 2010
    I have to say that I like where this story is going for the most part. I always liked KimRon better than Kigo but I still like this one. I do, however have a small nitpick. Kim's Mom does NOT call her Kimmiecub. That is exclusive to her Dad. Kim's mom calls her Kimmie:
    "Kimmie, the nana dress is cute."
    "Kimmie, it's just meatloaf."
    "Sorry, Kimmie. I've gotta drive the boys to soccer practice.'
    Always Kimmie. You might want to change that.
    Report Review

  • From Bishonen on June 11, 2010
    Man you really did a great job makeing Bonnie evil...Not that she wasn't half way there to start with and as for the battle suits they would be more than distracting to me! Anyways looking forward to what's next.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fogu-s_tofu (NLI) on June 11, 2010
    sweet story. would have reviewed sooner, but i procrastinate too much.

    looking forward to the next update.

    just out of curiosity, what would be the basic rules in the Middleton Pact?

    does that cover stealing medical supplies, because you constantly hear about henchmen complaining about medical coverage.

    maybe a special contact in acquisitions could help procure needed medical supplies. Ann is a doctor, and the villainy business is dangerous.
    Report Review

  • From OldSoldier on June 10, 2010
    I read 'The Middleton Pact' and 'Dark Mistress' on ff.n; real page turners :)

    Since I enjoyed those versions I don't mind re-reading to see what the redux is all about.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!