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Reviews for The Middleton Pact - Redux

By : fulwiz123
  • From 2CRsgt on August 19, 2010
    "...to grandmother's house we go." I know that song too. I have a feeling that Kim and Yori will be paying Nana a little visit, she woun't like in the least, as payback.
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  • From Manofevil on August 17, 2010
    This is rapidly becoming my favorite train wreck to watch. I love the way that K&S keep seducing all of the Possible clan and everything but I can't get past Kim's murder of Ron. Even with his subsequent resurrection, he was as close to a brother to her and she drew a Freddy Krueger level joy from killing him. Put simply, I keep waiting for her to turn on her family. It's clear that Nana is next and I'll bet the tweebs will be next after that, probably followed by her parents and then her concubines. Shego will probably be last. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Bishonen on August 16, 2010
    Two chapters at once very nice looking forwrad to more is all i have to say for now.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From 2CRsgt on August 16, 2010
    Armored Nana (AKA Miss Freedom) killed Mr. Dr. Possible's father. There is going to be some serious payback.
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  • From 2CRsgt on August 16, 2010
    I been out of it lately and things are starting to steam up! I have given up on guessing the next chapter because I have been wrong so many timy times before.
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  • From Bishonen on August 16, 2010
    Alright new chapter really love this story just wish the sex sences were longer but i like the plot a whole lot so it's okay i guess anyways looking forward to more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - mecella on August 10, 2010
    aww, you removed the ending for chapter 26 where kim left a message for ron carved in joss' flesh. i think that ending had a better impact and reinforced the reason why ron should back off while exemplifying his stupidity when he chooses not to.
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  • From Bishonen on August 09, 2010
    OHhhh major plot twist can''t wait to see how Betty deals with everything that happned to her and dlad to see Yori is on thier side that'll help a lot anyways looking forwaod to more

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Bishonen on August 08, 2010
    Well they are there just way under Ron. Don't have much to say other than looking forward to more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Meepo on August 06, 2010
    Awesome so far, read it over about two days, couldn't stop readin' it, couldn't wait fer the next page ta load. How ya continue writin'.
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  • From Bishonen on August 05, 2010
    Well some good and bad things are going to be happening to kim very soon and Ron really does have amazing dumb luck.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Wheelie91 on August 05, 2010
    I love what you've changed, makes it even better! Keep it up! And THANK YOU for making it more graphic! Keep writing.
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  • From Bishonen on August 04, 2010
    I was wondering how she'sd deal with the deal she made with Joss and as for what that one person said about ron haveing more good thean common sense that's also known as Lawful stupid with is just what he was in the show and in this really looking forward to the next chapter.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From KaelHyun on August 04, 2010
    No offence but this story sucks if your going to make kim evil make ron evil too dear lord I hate these brake up ron and Kim so kim can be with Shego fics
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  • From on August 04, 2010
    I wouldn't say that Ron would be 'throwing his life away', but I do think that he needs to see that killing Sensei was something that, while regretable, needed to be done. I don't say that most times about someone killing another person, but the way that you wrote it, this had to be done. Ron just has too much 'morality' and not enough common sense.
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