Click Here!

Reviews for Dreams of an Absolution

By : DeusExProcella
  • From Scorpinac on June 07, 2010
    Umm, most girls, I'm pretty sure, don't get their first periods until at least around fifth to seventh grade, to have it already at first arguably constitutes an extremely early bloomer, not to mention that usually happens after getting breasts, unless I'm very mistaken. Just saying. That aside, I think I see now what's caused her to finally regain her conscience, sudden hormone overload with a dash of pms. The next few chapters should be quite interesting irregardless. Well, until next chapter, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on June 06, 2010
    Well, well, it seems like Blossom's conscience has finally risen from the grave, along with the girl she used to be before Aku ever appeared before them, and now she's suffering a battle of ids. Though I got to wonder why she's bleeding, and from where exactly. I definitely look forward to the next chapter. Until chapter 19/15, then. Laters.

    Oh, and before I forget, from this moment on - Blossom froze don't you ever touch me again and stared at Princess. - the chapter is all in italics. You may want to fix that. Just saying. Again, Laters.

    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 25, 2010
    Baku? Seriously, doesn't he ever consider anything that isn't an alteration or rhyme of his true name, I mean how long does he really think that's going to work? But at least Blossom and Boomer seemed to have fun. And you'd think after the aforementioned previous beating into the ground that some, at the very least, of Princess's snobbiness would have abated, but apparently some people never learn... Well, until chapter 18, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Orsinox on May 18, 2010
    I don't speak lightly when I say this is one of the best stories I've read on this forum. I have never, in my life, laughed so hard at the depiction of an Evil From Before Time biting into his very first hot dog! xD Keep it up, My friend! Yours is the work of a true word smith!

    However, I do have a word of advice. The way you write your dialogue is sometimes a little confusing. By that, I mean that sometimes you place your dialogue next to the wrong character, making it seem like he/she was speaking when it was actually someone else. I would suggest relegating characters and their dialogue into their own paragraphs, thereby dispelling any confusion as to who is saying what.

    Can't wait until the next chapter, and I hope there are many more to come. Peace out!

    Sincerely,

    Hex
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 15, 2010
    Frankly, you'd think Princess wouldn't want anything to do with the Powerpuff Girls after her last appearance, given how badly Blossom plowed her into the ground that time. And I can see her doing a lot of studying while away, probably not much else to do aside of watch TV and maybe surf the web while in her hospital room. It'll be interesting to see where this little sub plot leads. Well, until chapter 17, then. Laters.


    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 10, 2010
    Hmm, that's a curious dream. And I note Jack appeared rather than the Professor, though Blossom didn't realize that. Could it be that her inner good is finally regaining full control?! We can hope, right? And nice to see Buttercup finally worrying about Blossom again, she may find the strength to forgive yet. Well, until chapter 16, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 06, 2010
    Okay, what could possibly be in the evidence room that she would want that badly? Can't wait to find out. And hopefully now Buttercup will be willing to finally listen to Blossom's advice again, so that'll help things along. Well, until chapter 15, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 05, 2010
    They both knew she was there the whole time, didn't they? Hehehe, an interesting conversation, to say the least. Okay, not to be a nudge, but shouldn't Sedusa have reared her ugly head again by now? A whisper, a minor crime, something, anything? Well, until chapter 14/11, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on May 03, 2010
    Hehe, Aku seems to be becoming more and human, doesn't he? Course, from what I've seen, Boomer would like to be Blossom's "special person", but only time will tell if he ever gets the nerve to say so. And I can't think of anything else to say, so until chapter 13, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on April 18, 2010
    He has rather a lot to learn, doesn't he? But then, do we really believe he'll ever actually learn? And in regards to his reaction to hot dogs, lol! And while I can't say the ongoing relationship is going to be any good for Blossom one way or the other, at least she's happy again. So, will Sedusa be rearing her ugly head again anytime soon, or this going persist a while longer? Just wondering as you seem to have misplaced a part of your plot. Well, until chapter 12, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on April 07, 2010
    Femme Fatale as the principal, huh? I imagine there's an interesting back story to that one. Course, I'm still waiting on the back story to Keane and Sedusa. At least things are going somewhat smoothly, and Blossom is kind of improving, though whether or not it is improvement given what's cheered her up remains to be seen. Well, until chapter 11, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on February 27, 2010
    Well, at least she's feeling better, but it's debatable if that's actually good or not. And at least Aku's taking her advice and doing his best to blend in and not make himself known otherwise, which for him is saying something. Aku ata manadatory meeting he's not in charge of...that'll be a new experience for him... Of, course, I'm still waiting for that back story on Sedusa and Ms. Keane. Well, until chapter 9, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on February 17, 2010
    On percent? Ouch, poor Blossom. And Aku, a grade school teacher? I weep for the children... In short, fantastic, and while this does seem to have brought Blossom out of her funk, it seems my prediction of a "backslide" is more or less on the money. Though I am a little surprised that Buttercup and Bubbles don't seem realize who their new teacher really is. Well, until chapter 8, then. Laters.

    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on February 16, 2010
    Hmm, Sedusa and Ms. Kean as sisters, that would explain the similarity between them. I look forward to reading the back story. On the other hand, it sounds like Blossom might back slide a little. Also, I'd thought the rubbing of her wrist was psychosomatic from having already worn and re-removed the bracelet, but I see you're keeping her "hobbled" for the time being, which sadly makes a certain amount of sense all things considered. As to the Chemical X Sedusa's sporting, I think I have an idea where she got it, and look forward to finding out if I'm right. Well, until chapter 7, then. Laters.
    Report Review

  • From Scorpinac on February 13, 2010
    Hmm, what has happened to Sedusa, I wonder? I'm guessing some kind of mutation, possibly something she did to herself with the Polarizer thingie, but feel free to surprise me. Well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!