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Reviews for Boil

By : modeac
  • From ANON - Kazuma on July 08, 2014
    More, please let there be more.
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  • From ANON - makahl on August 03, 2013
    nice 1984 reference.
    It's really twisted but that is what I like about it.
    hope you didn't abandon it
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  • From TheDaiLi on July 02, 2011
    Ignore the above poster, you're doing well. Some people just can't understand the subtle pleasures of mind-warping...I mean honestly, skip PAST the most interesting part that hardly anyone can be bothered to write and make it look like Katara's completely out of character from the get-go, rather than see the change as it happens? Cadness. This approach is much more satisfying and I'm very happy you've taken it.
    I'm curious to see how you plan on mixing the fighting part with what's going on on-ship, and though I have suspicions I'd rather just see the result than try to guess at it. Here's hoping for the next part to come...well. At some point!
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  • From ninesenshi on July 01, 2011
    I was initially excited to see you back; then I remembered the problems with this story. I enjoy torture and sex, which is probably why I read your story in the first place. Problem is, it's all torture and no sex. Please try and note at the start of next chap if sex is coming and when or else add the story code `nosex' so I can go elsewhere. If your point is that Katara will not break quickly, then just mention that weeks go by or however long you feel is necessary and move on to the sex. Or make it rape. But pure torture is not my thing.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From UltimateFucker on October 04, 2010
    Very interesting job on this fic, I hope you'll add more soon.
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  • From onemanga1991 on June 12, 2010
    Wow! this is an amazing story!
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  • From ANON - ngear on January 27, 2010
    Great story with a huge amount of detail! It is little things like the “approved faith list”, it points out that the fire nation is a dictatorship and it does it with more subtlety than scenes where people are slaughtered on a whim for example.
    Also love the huge amounts of info on the fire nation navy.
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  • From ninesenshi on January 01, 2010
    Good potential, disapointed that we did not get to the action. Judging by your other works I'm sure it will be good, if you stick with it. Did not know you were a naval buff...
    SailorNemesis

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  • From PurpleLizard on January 01, 2010
    Holy crap.
    A lot of thought went into this.
    I am amazed and thrilled at the time you took to put this together, and the amount of effort you put into this world. It's really really good, and I hope to read more:)
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