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Reviews for The Bonnie Rockwaller House Party Blow Out

By : Ice13
  • From Bishonen on October 30, 2009
    I read mostly yuri but i loved this it was so fucking hot i'd love to seee more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From bigherb81 on October 30, 2009
    Very nice one great job with the sex scene and the blow job scene. You did the damn thing with this story I would love to see some more of this done I think the fallout of this would be very interesting. Oh yea nice job with the drunken slur most people can't hit that right on. I'm guessing there's some experience there. Also loved the forceful drunk Bonnie, just something about a forceful woman that's such a turn on.
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  • From deruam on October 30, 2009
    Seem like a good story.I would say Ron take advandage of drunk Bonnie, it seem she enjoy cheating on her boyfriend.We'll see what happen in the next chapter?

    It first thought maybe you'll change it to Kim and Ron when they where planing to leave with each other.Maybe in the next chapter.?




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  • From RAW19 on October 29, 2009
    Well, i'm interested in more. I'm especially interested in what became of Kim while Ron was having his fun and whether or not Bonnie actually knew who he was. I do hope you post more in the future, as i found this highly interesting, sexual, and entertaining.
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  • From NarutosBrat on October 27, 2009
    oh you defintely have to continue this. the reactions of Kim, and how Bonnie will react to screwing the 'Loser', and then realizing that he was the best she ever had.
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  • From skoshi4 on October 26, 2009
    Yup, you'd better continue!
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  • From Elfangor87 on October 26, 2009
    Definatly continue
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  • From rcwilliams on October 25, 2009
    Very good story. Update it when you have a chance. I love a good Ron/Bon story. :)
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  • From freivolk on October 25, 2009
    Oh yes, that was good. Drunken at party. Okay, a classic , but you delivered it perfect. Okay, Ron fell aslleep beside Bonnie, But Kim waits ´for Ron, so I think she will come looking for him. So I say, carrie on.
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  • From on October 25, 2009
    There are some parts that are pretty good--I love the banter between Kim and Bonnie when Kim and Ron first arrive at the party, for example. But it could stand a lot more detail; there are some passages that are just dialog and nothing else, nothing about what characters are doing, their expressions, tone of voice, etc.

    Also, I honestly can't see Ron actually raping a girl (and yes, having sex with a woman who's obviously drunk out of her mind is rape), even if Bonnie not exactly a sympathetic victim. There's been some good stories on this site where Bonnie is more of a manipulator (see "Cheerleader's Peak" or the second chapter of "Love vs. Lust", for example); I think I would have preferred that kind of scenario.

    Nonetheless, I'm intrigued by this story; I'd like to see what happens next after all this.

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  • From Zarrthtion on October 25, 2009
    good story hope there's more
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  • From TheColeTrain on October 25, 2009
    best thing i've read in a while.
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  • From ponderguy on October 25, 2009
    AMAZING! I loved it. I can't wait for the fallout. Be cool to see it from kims perspective and see what shes up to while rons having fun
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