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Reviews for Paranoia

By : LouisLockhart
  • From AJAngelique on July 24, 2009
    ...wow! this is pretty good!
    please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Martel on June 23, 2009
    Heh, I just noticed I reviewed this story twice before this. Whoops. I am so so so glad that you updated, it doesn't matter how long it took.

    Poor, traumatized Danny. ;_;

    It won't take Jazz long to connect the dots. The thing is, I don't think she'll be able to help too much. Sam and Tucker are going to freak out when they find out.

    Ohhh Dark's evil plans are deliciously evil, and we haven't found out what they are yet! I'm curious to see what is making Danny's powers short-circuit. Is it really a device with future technology? And why hasn't Clockwork been able to do anything about this?

    So, I guess Danny is going to suffer through much worse before things get better, right? That is, if they ever get better at all.
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  • From ANON - Martel on June 07, 2009
    You're going to update this, right? I want to know just what Dark has planned, and what was the video tape for? (I mean, was it just for reviewing the event, or blackmail, or what?) I'm loving the story so far! There aren't enough well written fics of this pairing. And Danny is going to break down soooo epically. I want to see all the psychological repercusions this will have in his every day life. That's the interesting part of fanfics, how are the characters affected? What parts of their lives are changed by the events that they're thrown in? How do they act with each other?

    This is an excellent work, and it's just one chapter!
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  • From ANON - Martel on April 04, 2009
    You're going to deal with the psychological aftermath? Sweet.

    There were a few spelling errors, but nothing that distracted from the story.

    An underwritten pairing. I hope to see more of this!
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