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Reviews for Omiai

By : sherawksyou
  • From ANON - NymphDane777 on February 11, 2011
    Update soon please :)
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  • From LunarEclipse on July 02, 2009
    I liked this story very much. This is the first Ozai/Ursa story I have ever come across. Update soon!
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  • From Granite on April 07, 2009
    I really enjoyed this and I hope you do MORE!!! Stone2Fire
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  • From ANON - scarletcougar on March 25, 2009
    Avatar is also one of my favorite worlds for fanfic, too. I may move mine here because of its rare mature content.

    I had to comment on yours, the first fic I am commenting on here.
    Excellent! You have captured their personalities so well. You have well researched their clothing and traditions. Their passions and acts very realistically portrayed. And yet you keep the grace of wording that never crosses the line of crass or crude. Well done!
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  • From Harbor on March 23, 2009
    Great start! Welcome, I will be looing for more.
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  • From on March 23, 2009
    I love the tension you have created between these two. This has peaked my interest and I would very much love to have more of it. OrangePeelings~
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on March 23, 2009
    Ursa letting her inner fire burn out of control is freaking HAWT! Ohhh I like the edge of violence and that he's trying to control her but playing the head game of using her body as a weapon. Lovely job with keeping the charaters so interesting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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