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Reviews for Betrothal

By : hyperoo
  • From ANON - Kat on September 03, 2012
    Hello everyone. Just wanted to let you know that there's an additional chapter at http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1295744/hyperoo
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 03, 2012
    I'm begging you. Finish this Please.
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  • From pagelupin on August 26, 2009
    This was just amazing! I hope that you will continue with it. ^_^
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on April 28, 2009
    please keep up with this story it is rather interesting and it has been good so far, please keep it coming.
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  • From LadyWinterhartZC on March 21, 2009
    Excellent beginning to a great plot. I hope you continue this stoyr, for I am most curious to it's conclusion.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on March 14, 2009
    'following his primal, unconscious urges to get every last drop out into this virile young female' I loved this line.

    Thanks for letting us not wait long. The only thing I would change would be to put more space between the lines and space it out a bit to read easier. Other than that I enjoyed this and would like to see a fifth chapter to wrap it up.


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  • From CoffeeGyrl on March 13, 2009
    Nice read. I like the feelings and the discription you're using. But you're quite the tease leaving us dangling like that, you naughty minx. I can't wait until the next installment.
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