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Reviews for Memories from Western Airtemple

By : DarthAnimus
  • From ANON - Josh on February 13, 2009
    For the record, making ALMOST ANY CHARACTER say "Oi" is out of character. Unless the character is from Britain or Australia or some other place where they say it, THEY WILL NOT SAY IT. It sounds dumb.
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  • From ANON - wickedfences19514 on February 09, 2009
    I think this is really cute. I like the angst, because I just happen to love sob stories, but I also love your writing style. It's simple, but it's clear. You convey the emotions well, because I'm able to actusally feel them. I'm not just being "told" how they feel. ^_^ I hope you continue to update!

    Love,
    wickedfences19514
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  • From ANON - Kairan on February 04, 2009
    Oh WOW.I always liked Haru in the first season but after the stache... I couldn't really look at him anymore. You've really added depth to him here and well...I think I have another pairing now. XD. Oh Zuko, who can't we sandwich you with?

    ~*KA*~

    Aside from a few misspelled words, no complaints from this gramar-witch. And as always, your writing style is a pleasure to experience. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - FirexBoltx3000 on January 28, 2009
    This was a great story and I'm looking foward to reading more. I gave it 5+'s
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  • From alleycat88 on January 28, 2009
    Ok. Sooooo....Im in love. With this story. Please update more!
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  • From ANON - Kairan on January 27, 2009
    Yes, a new chapter! *dances* I have this fav'd and have been checking since my review to see an update. Jubilations. I actually like the way you phrase, I think it sounds pretty and almost poetic. Poor Zuko, no peace even at night.

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 26, 2009
    This is really well-done, I like it a lot. I also like that you said you have most of the chapters written in advance, which means no long waits between chapters. =)

    The only real criticism I have to offer is that sometimes the wording of certain sentences or dialogue is awkward or slightly odd. Is English your first language?

    Other than that, yeah, this story is A+ and I hope you continue it! =)
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  • From ANON - Kairan on January 23, 2009
    I did this in one sitting, and I'm sorry I was lazy and didn't review each chapter. I love what you're doing and how you're doing it. I cannot wait for the next chapter and see how this story ends. I hope you fit Zuko's redemption with Katara in; "Southern Raiders" was one of the best episodes of the series.

    ~*KA*~

    Ha, Aang is jealous of Toph. Just one thing I wanted to say about Toph too: she has pale green eyes, not blue (that just might be my own opinion though, so don't worry too much about it)
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  • From NAnderson on January 08, 2009
    well what do u expect? It just keeps getting better as it gos. And it hasnt even reached any lemoney goodness yet :P And Im a bit of an angst whore lol, so Im up for the dark before the storm. U keep updating and Ill keep reading! ^.^
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  • From NAnderson on January 06, 2009
    Fantastic fantastic fantastic!!!!!!! O come now Zuko u know y u want to pull Aang closer >:) lol. Ok Im officially in love with this story. I cant wait to c more updates. This whole story is flowing so well, and no one is acting OOC. Ur doing an amazing job with that part. Im just waiting to see when katura snaps and strikes lol, i bet it will be funny. Ok again update soon pretty please :D !!!
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  • From Arperilsilmar on January 05, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I encourage you to write more!!
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  • From Wingedmerkat on January 03, 2009
    I really like this story it is very good! Update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mia on December 31, 2008
    Hello, I read your story and I would like to say a number of things. First, I absolutely love this friendship between Toph and Suko, I cannot wait to see how it plays out between him and the rest of the team: who's going to be nicer/meaner and so on. Your story also has the very good grammer and spelling, its a welcome change from the many of the stories here. The fact that your has a good plot helps, can't wait to see wht comes next. I love the ZukoAang part, its going to be fun tosee how you acually make them get together, and whether everyone accepts them. Nice work, keep writing! (:
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  • From Madamdragon on December 24, 2008
    aw that was too cute! I love Zuko and Aang pairings, hope to see more soon! ^_^
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  • From MiriuOniaya on December 05, 2008
    Ohhh, I love this already! I'm always looking for more stories in the Avatar section, since there aren't that many. Specially recently updated ones. And my fave pairings are Zuko/Aang and Sokka/Aang . Oh, I am checking out your freewebs right now, and I see that you have so many of the chapters up for this on FF.net! Eeeek! Must totally check them out, but I will still be faithful here. I usually re-read stories I like, complete and incomplete, more than once. Can't wait for more!
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