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Reviews for Memories from Western Airtemple

By : DarthAnimus
  • From ANON - Kairan on May 20, 2009
    Yay, Katara's not a bitch anymore.

    (sorry the Southern Raiders didn't satisfy you, I was pleased with it). At any rate, this chapter was well worth the wait. I hope this doesn't mean the ride's almost over.

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on May 18, 2009
    OMG, that was funny. No Zuko, Aang does not want your virtue...at least not yet =^-^=(wink,wink)! Looking forward to some more updates!
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  • From ANON - Kairan on May 07, 2009
    Zuko to the rescue!! *has nothing of importance to add*

    ~*KA*~

    The ZukAang cuddling was missed.
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  • From ANON - Kairan on April 25, 2009
    But Katara, I thought you wanted the male bonding to stop, fufufu.

    ~*KA*~

    Love Aang's line "Zuko needs affection". He is like starving. Feed the flames, baby~
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  • From Madamdragon on April 18, 2009
    aw i like the way they are getting closer sounds like katara is jealous. hope to see another update soon please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kairan on April 17, 2009
    Yay, I forgot Papa Hakoda was there. Talk some sense into your daughter and stop her from being a bitch, hurrays~~~ *hugs Hakoda*

    ~*KA*~

    Haha...Aang wants Zuko's virtue. Nice one Toph.
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  • From Madamdragon on April 15, 2009
    thats so sweet there in each others arms. Thats the way it hould be! GREAT JOB UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Kairan on April 13, 2009
    I hope you didn't think I was being too nitpicky with my last review. This latest chapter was delicious. (though I'm now I curious as to why everyone is avoiding Appa).

    ~*KA*~

    Zuko gets a hug~~~
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  • From Madamdragon on April 13, 2009
    wow thats kind of sweet they are getting closer. hope to see an update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2009
    Nice development. The characters are believable, too. It's a nice read.
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  • From ANON - Kairan on April 05, 2009
    The writing was good but it feels really choppy. I would have rathered you expanded on the first part with Zuko and Sokka, maybe have them sparring or gathering food (like Sokka trying to spear something and Zuko watching from a safe distance). The "&" for separation roughs up the scenes, like a sudden brake in story flow. Transitions like the one from walking out on Katara to the Duke finding Zuko in the forest are easier to follow and not as drastic.

    Katara is being a bitch. All the anger and hatred from before Southern Raiders is up, we get it. Maybe now it's time to see someone confront Katara about it, instead of just having angry-pms!Katara trying to start a fight?

    The update was worth the wait, but it feels like there could have been more.

    ~*KA*~

    (this is coming from someone who hasn't updated her own fics in years, so I'd take this with a grain of salt)
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  • From ANON - Kairan on March 16, 2009
    You're making friends Zuko, it's just taking a while. You have the majority, even Haru and The Duke care. Now all you need is Katara and you have a full house. XD.

    ~*KA*~

    Sweet chapter is sweet.
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  • From ANON - Kairan on March 07, 2009
    Wow. I didn't think Zuko was getting physically ill from thinking about Jet. This was an awesome chapter.

    ~*KA*~
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  • From Madamdragon on March 06, 2009
    poor zuko he's had a tough life. Cute that aang is cheering him up. Update soon please
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  • From ANON - Kairan on March 03, 2009
    "Listening to him breath". That's so adorable. ^^~ A nice chapter, but a little short like the last one. Not complaining, just an observation.

    ~*KA*~

    BTW, I use "oi" and I'm not from Great Britain or Australia. If you like using "oi," use "oi".
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