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Reviews for The Avatar Saga - Azula's redemption

By : flamehead23a
  • From brainfear on May 23, 2010
    Well done! I love Mat! He manages to get under Azula's skin...and steal a kiss too!

    More please!

    ch4
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  • From Somatose on December 15, 2008
    I really enjoyed chapter 3. It was a bit shorter than the second chapter but I do prefer Mat's role in this chapter over the others, although Azula's escape could be slightly less dramatic. Hope you give us chapter 4 soon, Somatose.
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  • From ANON - Dave 22 on December 04, 2008
    Please go on.
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  • From Somatose on November 22, 2008
    I've just finished chapter 1 and I'm very impressed so far. The story flows nicely and the 'white phoenix' was introduced brilliantly as well. Your descriptions are well crafted and the plot seems to be interesting from what I've read so far. Keep up the hard work, I look forward to future chapters.
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  • From flamehead23a on November 21, 2008
    oh, don't get me wrong, I'm only offering this early updating system because I think Chapter 3 is ready to go now. I'm just doing this to try to encourage reviews. I wouldn't post anything without first making sure I was satisfied with it.

    (2/10, keep it up!)
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  • From traviswj on November 20, 2008
    I believe this is a story with great possabilities. If you keep writing at the level this story has started at, it will be brilliant.
    I don't believe chapter 2 was too long: I like long chapters because it means that there are less 'pauses' between reading chapters.
    I give it five stars, and can't wait for more chapters.

    Also, I don't think you should set numbers of reviews as conditions for quicker chapters. As soon as you are happy with a chapter it should be posted: there is no need to let peoples apathy get in the way of good stories.
    I know it can be hard for a story to have no reviews: my first story has around 100 hits, but no-one has given me a single reviev!
    Just be aware that there are people out there who admire your work, and really enjoy it.

    Also, your use of science was a great idea: most people ignore science and have improbable scenarios, but you have a perfectly relistic scenario.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From flamehead23a on November 19, 2008
    hrrm, I don't know why this is happening, it fits fine on my screen, but then again I've got a 17 inch laptop... I dunno what to tell you, since they make us post these things as text files, there isn't much we can do about indentations and such... But I'll look into it. Thanks for the advice! (1 review of 10, keep it up people!)
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  • From ANON - Helpful Nag on November 19, 2008
    This is not very reader friendly because of the width of the text. I have to scroll along the bottom to read the end of a sentence and then scroll back to read the beginning of the next. The amount of letters or words between the left and right indents are too great I think. I am not a lazy reader but that is way too much work. I would like to read it. :(


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