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Reviews for Lake Laogai

By : TheDaiLi
  • From DrDoom on July 13, 2009
    You certainly do know when to end it, leaving the audience wanting more.

    Here's hoping we won't have to wait to long for the next chapter.
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  • From MaiLee on March 30, 2009
    When you go through smut works on the web, there is usually a lot of nice PWP, interesting ideas, good charachter description, plots that make your skin crawl... But once in a while there comes a special fanfic that has everything at it's top level, stands out and makes you glue yourself to the screen, biting your lips, as your heart starts pumping faster. Lake Laogai - is that kind of fic, that should be called a classic!

    Thank you for creating this amazing piece! I hope you will continue writing... this story keeps buzzing in my mind.
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  • From sith2886 on February 11, 2009
    my father once told me that cursing makes you sound stupid,

    that being said, holy shit this is amazing. you...i... I can't even come up with coherent review comments.

    if i could i'd buy you a beer or something, please update soon
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  • From smokeandmirrors on January 25, 2009
    wow... the psychology in here is amazing... brilliant writing and very warped, exactly why i love this story :) Please continue this, i want to know whats in store for Azula.

    Update soon...

    xx
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  • From FanFicFantast on January 14, 2009
    Wow, just... wow. I´m trying to come up with a sutible way to express my awe at your talent as a writer in general, and erotica writer specificly. But i just can´t find the words.

    *Bows humbly*
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  • From DrDoom on November 17, 2008
    I must say this is one of the best Avatar stories I've ever read, let alone adult avatar stories. The characters are how I would believe they would react to the situations and you do a great job painting a picture for the reader. Keep up the good work, and hope to see a new chapter soon.
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  • From Masterdudemind on October 26, 2008
    Excellent story. It's a true crme that this fic doesn't have more reviews.

    Your 'visuals' are stunning, the characterization is on-spot and plot (it actually exists!) is awesome. A greedy part of me would love to see a girl or more added (Katara/Toph/whpever), but regardless I have every intention of reading what will clearly be a great story. Hope to see more soon!
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  • From CViperFan on October 14, 2008
    I just want to say that this fic is fantastic in every way, and I eagerly look forward to an update :D
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  • From SexyLizard on October 14, 2008
    I don't normally review stories.

    But this one is special.

    This is the only story I have read on AFF where I think Azula's character is protrayed well.
    It is certainly the only flemslash story featuring Azula where her character is protrayed well and sympathetically
    that I have read.

    Please continue it.
    I can't wait to see if Ty-Lee can seduce Azula, or what happened to Mai for that matter.
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  • From FillingTheVoid on October 12, 2008
    When this story disappeared a while back I was quite sad, since it's a personal favorite on the website. But when I saw it was back up, I was very happy.

    Then I saw the new chapter, and read it.

    And now I am ecstatic.

    Things are developing brilliantly and I am finding myself eagerly anticipating how you'll direct things from here. I cannot wait to see the final products of Mai, Ty Lee and Azula.

    You get extra points for focusing on gagging Azula. Made my day, that did. I'm a sucker for girls in bondage, so you've hit my tastes spot on. I don't want to come off as one of those pompous reviewers who demand things in the stories they read, but I would like to say I look forward to whatever binds and gags you put on the fire nation girls from here on in!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From WildWestSamurai on October 12, 2008
    Not sure why no one's reviewed this, so I thought I should throw you a bone: You've earned it. I've never seen an adult story and psychology cooperate and compliment each other so well. This is a delicious piece, from the rich textures of your flawless description of each Ozai's Angel's status, physically, emotionally, and mentally and how the Dai Li overcome those obstacles to the tense and arousing buildup of the sexual aspect of the story. Well, I wouldn't say it's a full-fledged story, as I'm unsure of where this may be going, but this is one intriguing piece that blurs the line between evocative writing/storytelling and delicious smut.

    Put simply, this piece rocks and I hope you update soon.

    P.S. Goddamn, Ty Lee looks sexy in that outfit you described in such rich detail. The image is stuck in my head now.
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