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Reviews for Kingdom of War

By : Jayrich
  • From Somatose on December 02, 2008
    Another good chapter. Very well written, I like how you use language and you're descriptions are usually great. So far, the plot seems to be well thought out, even though the focus of the story shifts quite abruptly. I like the way you've portrayed Azula and Iroh. looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From flamehead23a on November 30, 2008
    enjoyed it. Sort of wished the Gaang had put up a better fight, but still pretty entertaining. looking forward to longer and better chapters.
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  • From ANON - Faerie In Combat Boots on November 28, 2008
    Interesting...a lot of potential. One problem though. In the scene with Azula in the infirmary you made a grammar and spelling mistake. You wrote: "Grounded Pedals" When it should be "Ground Petals" Other than that the story is very good so far.
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  • From Somatose on November 22, 2008
    I've really enjoyed reading chapter 3, your descriptions are vivid and the plot is interesting...looking forward to next chapter
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  • From flamehead23a on November 16, 2008
    wow, Gotta say, I find the character protrayals spot-on. You've given Toph all of the character I wish she had during the main series. Zuko's and Mai's relationship is great, and I still haven't quite figured out what you plan on doing with Sokka. at first I though menage a trois with suki and Ty Lee, but now... the possiblites are endless!! :) Keep on writing, this is my number one fic on aff.
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  • From ANON - Jim Jefferies on November 15, 2008
    I thought that chapter was funny
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  • From Somatose on October 23, 2008
    Very well written story using many imaginative ideas. Looking forward to chapter 3...
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  • From ANON - Caligula on October 18, 2008
    I like it so far
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  • From ANON - rider on October 17, 2008
    ohhhhh thats a fun concept your playing with.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 09, 2008
    aside from some poor word choices the story seems to be developing nicely hope yo see more
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  • From on October 01, 2008
    Me likey. Which characters are going to be in the threesome? And when are Katara and Aang going to have a lemon scene? Update fast.
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  • From ANON - waterspear567 on September 30, 2008
    gotta keep my eye out on this story.
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  • From ANON - Big Ralf on September 29, 2008
    yeah, one of my favorite writers is taking on an avatar fic. Now I have something to look forward to.
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