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Reviews for Team Alphanumeric

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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on May 04, 2009
    Man, I admire Becky's self control, she seriously has to have the urge to rip that woman's head off. This doesn't look good for Lexicon and Decimal. Doesn't this consortium realize that just because Lexicon and Decimal have stopped fighting each other, they can still fight someone else. Well, Decimal can. Man I pity that Tribunal once they get hold of Becky. I just hope they don't make the mistake of trying to remove Carina from her custody.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on May 03, 2009
    Ah, yes, the grandmother who's right about everything, even when she's not. Trust me, we've all been there. But that is a good point. I expect Team Alphanumeric would play hell with any kind of work schedule. Then again, Clark Kent did it. You could have them go the Peter Park route and sill pictures of Wordgirl and Math Whiz to the papers.

    Becky could always get a job as a freelance editor. She could work at home, flexible hours and you know she'd be good at it. Well whatever you decide, I'm sure they'll figure things out. At least they don't have to worry about babysitting with Huggy around. Heh, can't wait to see how Grandma drakesford reacts to him.

    Mrs. Drakesford wouldn't neccesarily have to sell her house. They could just combine the two properties together, kinda like a duplex of sorts. And god knows they could use the extra space. I mean Carina doesn't even have a room yet.

    Oh not to nit pick. But it's wrapping. Rapping is what Will Smith used to do before he turned into a movie star.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on May 01, 2009
    Hee hee, oh this was fun. Nice take on the akward position scene. I was thinking something a little lower, but I guess your version would be a bit more practical for running. Somehow I doubt we've seen the last of Eileen. She's not the type to take things lying down. Poor Caelum, you think Emma will get ticked off at him for copping a feel on Eileen? Not that he had much choice in the matter.

    So I guess Chuck and the Butcher are gonna take a little break from crime? I mean being on the city council eats up a LOT of time. Heh, I can imagine the ring trying to pick out a new name to distance themselves from Big, only to get into a major argument over what they should be called.

    Here's hoping we get to see more of Carina and maybe Violet this season. Ooh here's a though. Maybe one Valentine's day, the two decide to (borrow) the lust ray from Two-Brains and play cupid, with predictable results. Anyway can't wait to see what you got planned for next season.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 29, 2009
    Ouch, poor Eileen. I know she can get possessive, but she didn't deserve that. Heh you know Eileen is gonna try to get even with Emma. Hmm, maybe Tobey can help her out in that department. Some kind of muscle enhancer, or robot battle suit. Wordgirl's gonna have to find a way to settle this fast, before those two tear up half the town.

    Hey now, that's a though. Mr. Big could use this to his advantage. Maybe he hit Eileen with the lust ray and send her rampaging across town after Caelum. Heh, I hope she doesn't get her hands on him while she's giant, or he could wind up in some VERY inappropriate places.

    On a similar note, wouldn't it be funny if Mr. Big lost, but some more likable members of the ring, like Chuck or even the Butcher actually won? Talk about a blow to the ego.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 28, 2009
    Whoa, only plot line? It's only the beginning. I mean what about the aftermath. You've got Emma and Caelum, is that official, trying to figure out where they belong. The Huntress and Krog are still around, they're going to have to deal with that. Not to mention Tobey and Phantasma, we've hardly seen the last of them.

    And not to be picky, but when was the last time we've seen Becky and Tim just relax and spend time with their friends and family, not to mention their daughter. Trust me, there's still plenty of ground left to cover.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 27, 2009
    OOh, the weapons, Tobey and Eileen all in the same place, this is gonna be fun. Eileen is one of my favorite baddies. Mainly because she's not really that bad, just a spoiled rotten brat. Dude, this is like the first time I've ever heard you drop an F bomb in this story. Who said that, anyway? It wasn't really clear.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 26, 2009
    Ooh, boy, gearing up for the next wave, I can't wait. But one thing, did the media or Mrs. Botsford ever formally call them the ring?
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 25, 2009
    Ahh, Becky and Tim are home and things are back to abnormal. I hope Lexicon turns out ok. Wonder what X2 and Emma are going to do next. They can't exactly go back to Lexicon or Decimal. But, it might get a little uncomfortable having them around on Earth. Of course nothing wrong with a little back up now and again.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 24, 2009
    Ooh, but this is getting fun. But don't think you Becky should try to organize some kind of government? That's why they came. I'd almost say put Gladiator in charge, but he'd never go for it and I don't blame him.

    And I thought MY family could squabble. Talk about putting the fun in dysfunctional. Oh and I forgot about this before, but probably best that Becky doesn't find out about Carina's little adventure.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 23, 2009
    Heh, things are really picking up. I get the feeling becky is about to raise a little hell on Lexicon. Speaking off, is this going to be a one on one fight, or is Emma going to drop in at some point? Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 21, 2009
    Yeah, that's the guy. As for names, anything that sounds like a grunt or battle cry will do fine. Just keep it to two syllables or less.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 20, 2009
    Heh, now things are REALLY picking up. Poor Tobey, run ragged by a one year old. Let's just hope the other villains don't find out about this, he'd never hear the end of it. I like our new barbarian friend. By any chance have you ever heard of a comic book character called Lobo? Just curious.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 19, 2009
    Not bad, so far. Man, I have no idea how Becky is going to fix this mess. She's gonna have to try to organize some kind of long term government.
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  • From ANON - Max Jordan on April 16, 2009
    Not a bad start, thought you may want to lay off the xenophobia. After all Lexicon and Decimal did just join forces to fight off an invasion. Oh I'm sure there'll always be some resentment, but for the most part I think the people of Lexicon would be a bit more concerned with making sure their planet doesn't go down the toilet.
    Oh, and this is probably just me, but, Plucky? Come on.
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  • From ANON - MaxJ1800 on April 03, 2009
    Oh, yes, reign in a bunch of egos by putting EACH of them in a position of power. Mr. Big will NEVER learn. Hmm, Arabian Bomber messing with a super powered baby. Why do I get the feeling he's bitng off more than he can chew? Apparantly no one ever told him that female predators are most dangerous when protecting their young.
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