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Reviews for Blind in the Water

By : Maritova
  • From Roar_nation on August 25, 2018

    Just wow! I love pretty much everything about your fic. It has everything I love in an adult fic, a good story, good characters and the sex parts comes naturally and aren't forced. It's not a "hey, let's bang each other" kind of story. It's a slow and natural progression. I loved it.

    I aslo loved how you were able to take us inside Toph's head and how she perceived things as a blind teenage girl. I loved how you reminded us that Toph is younger and the others are aware of that and uneasy about if at first. That's great writting.

    All in all, reading your story made me feel like I was watching a reel secret episode of the series. Like, had the original series ever decided to go there for some reason, that's how it would've happened.

    My only downvote about it was that I found it hard to understand some of the positioning of the characters at time. Like when you said that Toph's arms were locked by Suki but somehow, she can still reach Suki's privates. That was hard to picture. 


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  • From Rudolfs0807 on December 28, 2010
    this is one of the best erotic ficsa i've read so far! excellent job!
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  • From TheColeTrain on February 02, 2009
    Not really anything I didn't like about this story.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 31, 2009
    This was a lovely, hot and very sweet threesome. You kept everyone in wonderful character. I really enjoyed this fic.
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  • From JohnMadden on January 21, 2009
    Just finished the story and got to say it was amazing, gope to see write more stories like this.
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  • From JohnMadden on January 21, 2009
    wow, can't believe I didn't know about this story.
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  • From flamehead23a on January 08, 2009
    I gotta say, that was one of the most well-written fictions I've read on this site. Ever. The perfect balance of fluff, lemon, and IC. Threesomes aren't easy to do, especially if you are trying to leave the characters with any integrity. but you pulled it off wonderfully. I only wish my story had such a good balance of plot and sex... as is right now, It's only the former!

    but anyway, great work, and I would most assuredly read a continuation of this story-- or anything else you choose to write!

    keep up the amazing work,

    Flamehead23a
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  • From Seviper on January 07, 2009
    Wow, that was simply amazing Maritova.

    It was a little hard to follow how the three were positioned at times but I think that's a problem for every erotic fanfiction. You really managed to convey how the characters, especially Toph, felt during the sex scene. Great use of language too.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on October 19, 2008
    Not entirely sure why you don't have more reviews, but this is aff.net. No in-depth story's entirely required here; the requirements involve smut, characterization, and decent delivery on the writing field. You excelled in all three. The characters were fairly true to what I'd imagine Adult Swim versions of them would be like, the sexuality and the way you wrote was fantastic. This was a very swell piece of entertainment. Thanks, and I hope you update.
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