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Reviews for Totally Unexpected

By : Pakrat
  • From FOPJoe on December 25, 2014
    I enjoyed the story and I would love to have the next chapter with the three way with Trixie, Veronica, and Timmy.
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  • From Sabbs on November 21, 2009
    Hey nice start of a really good story. You write well, like your descriptions...I gotta do more in that line...sigh. Anyway hope you write more, its a given i'll be back to read more. :)
    Thanks for posting.

    Sabbs.
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  • From Shawndra on February 01, 2009
    Well, I have to say it was a very interesting story. You put much detail into the characters and the sex scene alike. Please don't leave this one unfinished like so many others have done with their own fanfics. Please post another chapter.

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From RAW19 on August 25, 2008
    Totally caught me off guard, especially the......rimming? Is that the term? The Anal Tonguing. That was probably my favorite part as it's not seen too often. I loved it, saved it, and applaud it. Great work!
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  • From EmperoroftheNetherlandsII on August 23, 2008
    Mr. Pakrat,

    An excellent anecdote, I hope to see more. And if I may say, for a man who just joined in June, outstanding.

    Watching and Waiting,
    His Imperial Majesty, Byron, Emperor of the Netherlands
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  • From wasup8322 on August 08, 2008
    story was good. do continue it
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  • From pettrum on July 30, 2008
    Awesome story, I hope it continues :-)
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  • From GhostwriterMO on July 30, 2008
    I can't wait either for the next chapter so please soon!
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