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Reviews for The Big One

By : esn1g
  • From AndraiaGFSTS on October 17, 2009
    I love this story. You really seemed to have caught the personalities of each charicter. You should be prod of you acmplished story. Good form!
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  • From DMajorBoss on June 05, 2009
    At first, the thought of reading about SatAM's Robotnik in anything sexual made me question whether or not I wanted to venture down such a path; honestly, I'd prefer reading about Snively in comparison. However, by how this turned out, I admit that it was well worth the time.

    The mood is well set and befitting of the show, as are the characters and their personalities within. It's easy to envision all of this as though it's a true event that wasn't shown within the show itself. It is only because this story is on this site that one would instantly assume that there are sexual relations between the individuals within, as the quality of this piece sort of takes you out of the "erotic zone" in its presentation; that is to say, this is so good, you really don't realize it's a sexual creation until a good bit into the story. The sexual scene itself is nicely done, and the writer does a swell job of not dwelling too much on Robotnik in the descriptions of his actions. Both are well described here, with nothing too vulgar sticking out, but Sally gets more attention to detail in these descriptions, so it's not too overcoming that she's with someone VERY much her opposite. You can even feel her disdain for what's going on and what she's doing to garner her prize. Also, even when questioning if the thought of having a part of Robotnik within her (semen, not penis) is worth anything at all (and hoping that, even in a quick shower, she managed to clean herself thoroughly), her reasoning at the end of the story shows just how dedicated she is to the cause of overall freedom. Withstand a battle to win a war, in my view.

    It's always nice to come across such well written pieces online these days, and I give my thanks for sharing such an intriguing and enthralling story for everyone to behold. May you have good fortune upon all of your creative endeavors.
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  • From RAW19 on January 30, 2009
    *roflao* Great read, dude. Great read.
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