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Reviews for The Price to Pay for a Kiss

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - Lady Delilah on March 07, 2008
    Hey there,

    I just wanted to say *thank you* and to give you a big *virtual* hug for writing this one-shot. I never liked the introduction of Tom Sloane to Daria. It seemed to me that to make Tom look even shinier they dumbed down Trent in a big and miserable way. Also, what it did-in the canon universe-was cause a lot of pain between Jane and Daria--too many whince-worthy episodes if you ask me. I'm sorta surprised Jane didn't give Daria a slap and they talked it over later that nigh with Trent putting the moves on her at his kitchen table when she apologized to him too. Irregardless, I *loved* the way this one-shot came out. I'm just a blathering insomniac.

    My main reason for commenting was to say that I loved this story. I liked seeing Tom get roughed up by Jessie and Sandy getting her comeupance (sp?). It was nice to see Daria be comfortable in her "Quinn-attire" too. Mostly I liked the way Trent sorta took charge with Daria and confronted her on the music (I've always thought that she could've worked with him on it instead of just expecting him to churn it out and deliver it to him.

    Well that's my two cents...and maybe a dime thrown in for good measure.


    Just keep up the good work mate,

    Lady Delilah
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  • From ANON - AMindOfIron on February 20, 2008
    I enjoyed this story and hope to see my Daria fic from you (and in general). the only issue I saw was the the exchange involving sandy felt slightly disordered and a little unclean. other then that it was great. thanks for writing it.
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