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Reviews for Vengeance

By : Granite
  • From Payden on April 14, 2008
    Really nice flow to this story is it so intriguing I am looking for more. Love the meat of the characters, they have a cause and a reason to be in this story and are not in here just to be in the story. You have a excellent touch to your writing that I am addicted to so ...continue
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  • From Mackrel on April 09, 2008
    Well Done! You are creating something very special with this story. It just puts its hooks into you and you become a very willing reader. Excellent job Send in the next chapter. DOT
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  • From on April 06, 2008
    I have been waiting for this update for a long while. You did an awesome job. I love the flow and the pace. It is perfect. You do that very well in all your stories. This story is so intoxicating and thrilling I did not want to stop. Where is chapter three?

    I love the characters that you chose to be in this story they fit and you dot hem justice even your own character. I will be watching for the next update with excitement. Your stories are a breath of fresh air to me keep it going. OrangePeelings
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2008
    This is pretty good. Well paced and intriguing. Hope you do more.
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  • From ANON - evoD on April 04, 2008
    Love what you are doing with this story. It is so clean and thrilling the way you write. The situations that you have them in is so original. I love that very much much. You are my favorite author by far.Keep up the fanstatic work. evoD
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  • From Harbor on April 01, 2008
    MORE! This is so sweet I love this already.You are an awesome writer. All of your stories are addictive and awesome. MORE!
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  • From ANON - Shard on March 31, 2008
    Really cool story, I truly enjoy the way this one is shaping up. I want to read more, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ky on March 31, 2008
    This is going to be one hell of an awesome ride. I love what you have her do far. Keep updating at your pace your writing makes it worth well. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Wisdom not logged in on March 30, 2008
    This is a trully fanstatic story I am hooked and panting for more. I love your worlds of fiction. Wisdom
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  • From ANON - Coreena on March 30, 2008
    Wonderfully done!. I must say you are an awesome writer. Let the muse feed and grow within you and never stop writing you are awesome at it. Bring on the next chapter.

    Coreena
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  • From Scorpinac on March 30, 2008
    Ah, love at first sight. Isn't it romantic? I do hope Wan will be eliminated quickly, he's way too big an ass. And why is Ursa, Zuko's mom in cannon, Katara's mom here? That seems a little...odd... Well, until chapter 3. Laters.
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  • From ANON - maron on March 29, 2008
    Amazing story so far, I can't wait to see how to continue this.
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  • From ANON - got it memorised on March 29, 2008
    wow, i like your storyline with this powerful zuko. so update, i want to see where this story goes.
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  • From ANON - flynalien on March 29, 2008
    Love the twist and very intimate moment with Zuko and Katara. More please!
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  • From RedWine on March 29, 2008
    A quote from this story

    "She was worth the fight of her people. She was worth the desire. She was worth...him. HIs eyes slowly prasied her body as they cascaded over her. A savior is what she needed a savior is what she had."

    Your wording in this story is awesome. I love the Way you bring Zuko and Katara together and how he forgets why he is there and how the others see him mesmerized by the Princess. I wonder what will drive him away from her if not his vengeance.

    I think Wan is a liar. He is hiding something. I do not think Yue has anything to do with his being there.

    Is Sokka really over Yue and what role will Toph have in this. Aang does not seem happy that Sokka is neglecting Yue. What will he do?

    I love all the scenes you have the way they all mesh together is perfect. I wait for the next chapter. FAB
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