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Reviews for World's Best Assassin

By : PatPat
  • From ANON - Skitzi on January 01, 2009
    This is a very well writen story, with all the characters almost painfully human on a slightly dystopian background.

    I can't wait for the next installment if there is one to come, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - bumblur on February 25, 2008
    For such a light hearted cartoon, this story is deep. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Skeeve on February 22, 2008
    Excellent addition to the story. The introspection that the young girl is going through helps establish that she is not a simple play thing, and gives credence to Ron's decision to make her his apprentice. One thing I didn't mention in my previous review, was the brutality of Ron's alter ego. Personally some S&M is OK, but please don't make it a mainstay.
    Skeeve
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  • From ANON - jonathan on February 21, 2008
    Interesting Glad to see an update on this one. I really like your stories they have a damn good plot and the tragic hero.

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  • From ANON - Skeeve on February 20, 2008
    A very interesting story indeed. Your take on the older Ron Stoppable is very unique, compelling and intriguing. I could not stop reading once I got started and I'm looking forward to future installments. You may want to proof your story for some spelling errors that can distract from the flow of the reading, but that is the only flaw and could see. Good luck on your future installments.
    Skeeve
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  • From ANON - Zero on February 12, 2008
    Intriguing. An interesting concept if I must say. I believe that this could be a kickbutt story, given more time. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Erik Parmlind on February 11, 2008
    Hey, I am interested in what you will be doing with this, considering the original story posted of Fanfiction was already quite descriptive. If all you want to do is descibe the abuse taken to an even greater level than I am fine with it infact far better that it is here than on fan fiction since this portrayal of Ron was not his best. But personally I hope you will continue the theme of Melody's destroying those who fucked with her father. That would be fun considering her blood line. Or if possible you have plenty of material in the original story for insanely descriptive torture, I wouldn't mind an expansion of Chapter VI, in the original considering the violence already depticted. Having Ron rape a six-year old would be intersesting. But, I appreciate your work and hope to see more of it in the future.
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