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Reviews for The Penance Series

By : lala82
  • From DrkVrtx on June 25, 2012
    Well...well, allow me to just fix my face for a minute...there we go. Damn, I am impressed. All I have to say at the minute is ooooh snap this is good stuff. Though it seems to be on hiatus at the minute? Hope this doesn't end up be fated to be a deadfic, it's just a bit too awesome, you know?
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  • From ANON - ThatGirl on June 20, 2012
    This was beautifully written!! I LOVED how you paralleld it with actual events in ATLA!! GREAT JOB!!!!
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  • From poornmiserable on December 22, 2011
    any chance on a new chapter?
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  • From ANON - RainnA on December 21, 2011
    Wil we be hearing from you anytime soon?
    There's so much I want to know! So many questions left unanswered!
    Zuko and Katara must work it out!
    It just kills me to think of Zuko's guilty pained face as Katara left him in the 3 chap. I loved the fluff, it made me feel so warm and fuzzy! The change in their interactions from before to that night was very well done, very good transition in Zuko's character. And the way Katara yields to him is undeniably heart-fluttering--her act of thanks did it for me.
    I'd also like to add in a small review for chp 1. I think you did a great job of having it in Zuko pov, its so refreshing and intriguing to see what he has to say about their first encounter, and not Katara, who is left to remain mysterious and distant. Like before, very well described and believable. Also, for ch 2 I have to say that it was very enjoyable to read. And no, mainly, I adored the way you made the reader siffer with Katara, and for us to feel alone and far away from Zuko as she did. The only thing I would have liked to see in this chap is a stronger response from Zuko when he gets back from the trip. I feel like he really did ignore Katara, and that in reality, if he really did want her that much, he'd pay more attention to her before she'd resort to getting his attention the way she did. Anyways, sorry for the long review, but you deserved to be praised, and I just wanted to let you know that I consider this the best Zutara fic I've ever read and that you do all us Zutarans proud! ;)
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  • From ANON - Hyma on December 16, 2011
    LOL Did Katara take out his sperm at end of ch 3!?
    ....she. Didn't...
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  • From ANON - prawlngh on November 20, 2011
    damn. that's hot. got anymore? HAHAH
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  • From ANON - Porkbun on November 17, 2011
    MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR dammmit!!! how could you stop there?!?!! HOW?!?! T_T
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  • From ANON - Teresa on October 28, 2011
    Wow! Rarely have I read such exceptionally well written and entertaining PWP! Loving it! Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - Kathy Quinn on September 14, 2011
    Oh my that was great!!! Please say that there will be more!
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  • From ANON - alyshon:) on August 24, 2011
    damn, write something already! can't wait to see what happens. i hope hakoda finds out there's something going on between them...not everything, just something. muahahaa seriously though, post the next chappy already. 8D
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  • From ANON - renh0stelz on August 18, 2011
    You have NO idea just how much I've begun to believe this happened in the series! I automatically and seriously start to incorporate it into the storyline as if I actually saw the episodes for this and I really don't even think about it until I'm like: Oh waaiit... that was just fanfiction. Damn it!
    You're just so good at writing this. I can't help it! You really got me. Now I just hope you haven't abandoned the story, that would make me so miserable! Please have another amazing rendition of a chapter to match your past ones for this next one soon!
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  • From ANON - lathamA on June 02, 2011
    What a good plot! Damn hot though sometimes so wrong in so many ways... what makes it so good is that everything is so believable. I like this even more than what is rated as tops. You just need a little more exposure, but I'm pretty sure many others would agree. You kick everyone's butt in realistic fanfiction here at the Adultfiction Avatar category, and in most other fandoms as well.
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  • From ANON - Jacob on April 17, 2011
    Excellent story - I love how you incorporated the actual storyline so smoothly. Admittedly, Katara occasionally seems a little bit out of character, but overall you've done a fantastic job with this - kudos.
    I look forward to reading future chapters!!
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  • From ANON - Debo44 on April 10, 2011
    Can you please write some more. You got me falling off my chair with this story. Its driving me nuts. Every single time I read it, I see something new. How you manage to describe their chemistry and their actions, and every character`s reaction is beyond me. You have a great little treasure here. Don`t leave us hanging any longer, please. I know I`ve read this a douzen times and its only the first time I review. Think of all your other fans! I`ll be leaving on a little trip, and if another chapter is not written by the time I get back I`m gonna cry. Anyways, love the PENANCE SERIES. And thank you.
    Debo44
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 02, 2011
    I'm delighted that you updated! I love the way your story is progressing - how you worked in, and tweaked, the happenings of the show. As someone a little more interested in the angst than the sex I can't tell you how refreshing it is to come across a story that pays as much attention to the actual storytelling as to the sex, and I'm loving the fact that we have a fresh source of angst for the two of them. Looking forward to your next update!
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