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Reviews for Under Lake Laogai

By : AloofandAndrogynous
  • From CoffeeGyrl on June 14, 2008
    The biggest question I can't figure out is who would I rather see as the meat in this sandwitch, Kuei or Katara? I think I'm going to be happy either way and so will Kuei and Katara...he he he:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2008
    When are you gonna update! OMG please update!!!
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  • From DecieverGod on April 16, 2008
    I do believe you are my favorite author on this site. This is particularly nice, it's hard to write for those minor characters like Long Feng, you got any tips? -Hope Hope-
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  • From InkHeart17 on March 28, 2008
    Now the voyeurism added a nice new touch. Very sexy. And I'm really amused at the image of all the Joo Dees being robotically erotic. There's enough of them to make a nice orgy with all the Dai Li...
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  • From ANON - swirling dreams on February 21, 2008
    OMFG!!!!!!! THIS WAS SO GOOD! I LOVE UR WRITINGS AND I WAS SO GLAD TO HERE THAT U WROTE ANOTHER STORY AND I LOVED IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! UR AWESOME!
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  • From Kira73 on February 10, 2008
    Very hot! I can see why you didn't want this on Fanfic! Love it!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 10, 2008
    It's a great story. There are some minor spelling and grammar problems, but that's to be expected with such a long chapter.
    Keep up the great work, I've enjoyed all of your stories so far, and this is one of my favorites already.
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  • From ANON - Kiki on February 04, 2008
    that was hot...
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  • From ANON - Doubtful Grace on February 03, 2008
    Hi! I didnt know I could review until just now. I havnt read a story of yours I havn't liked. Im glad to see you've made a new one and enjoy as always how you put so much work into them to make them so fun to read! Cant wait to see what you plan to do next!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on February 02, 2008
    Wow I thought 'In the Forrest' was amazing but you really managed to top yourself. This was hot and creepy and sexy and disturbing and squirmy and cold.

    Fantastic job. You did a great job keeping him in character and balancing Katara's emotions with her physcial reactions. The paragraph about the Siren's song was freaking great. I love the distance in that he didn't kiss her but nuzzled her, very cool. The whole end part was off the hook and you really got my heart rate up reading this.

    This is brillant and as soon as fichaven is back up this is going on my fav list. I would put it up here but I can't quite get it to work out. I am sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update.
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  • From ANON - kube on February 02, 2008
    hot story! can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Tow on February 02, 2008
    Good story! I'd give it 10 stars if I could!
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  • From ANON - Lumi on February 02, 2008
    Wow! That was fantastic! The way Long Feng spoke, the way he handled it... very IC. Will he do something naughty to Azula too?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2008
    That was pretty hot. Ypu described it nicely, and I cannot wait to see what you have planned next!!!!!!!!!
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