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Reviews for Witching Hours

By : Gunwild
  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2014
    how have i missed this story until now? this was scrumtrilescent!!! you write so well that even incest seems sexy and wonderful! i think this has to be the best fan work of w.i.t.c.h ever made!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2014
    hot
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  • From Yumberduddle on June 24, 2014
    i've read this story a lot over the years, and its always a delight to see it update. ur writing style is very good and feels very real in how u handle the characters. i know u hear this in a lot of reviews but my fave part of this story is the will and susan parts, mom-daughter is very important and special to me for personal reasons and every time i read ur portrayal of their relationship i feel a happy warmth (along with other things lol). as far as i'm concerned this story is my canon when it comes to will and susan's love lives. but like i said u hear that a lot, and i hope u know that all of ur story is great, not just the will and susan parts, and i love almost every part a whole lot. pls do keep writing this!
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  • From ANON - The Todd on June 23, 2014
    This Story Is Fucking Awesome Five!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2014
    Can I just say that seeing this story update after I was sure that it had gone under for real this time has been the highlight of my month? And to have the newest chapter be more Susan and Will is just......there are no words to describe how happy this makes me! It's a little light on story and characters, but it sure makes up for it with good, old-fashioned sexy times mixed with sweet romance. In this age of internet porn making traditional turn-ons outdated, your writing's so great that the conventional old "attractive woman getting soaked in tight clothes" thing seems new and absolutely vibrant with sensual appeal! Your portrayal of Will and her mom is one of the more tender, romantic, sexy, and natural attractions and love stories in the whole adult fanfiction scene. Please keep writing this story, because it's great! I can't wait to see what comes next. I hope we get to see things advance for Cornelia and Taranee, haven't seen much of them for a while, and what things are like for Hay Lin and Orube once they've been dating for a little while...and of course, obviously more of Will and Susan is always welcome! :D
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  • From ANON - Lazah on January 04, 2013
    I cant believe this is still going! I read this years ago and I almost forgot about it until today. I thought CHappy five and six are great. This is probably just me but I think Chappy 7 doesn't grab me as much but that's just me, its all great and I hope you still keep writing on this
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2012
    Wow, this last chapter was....not up to your usual standards of quality. Just...it's like someone else wrote it. Maybe it's because I've always hated Will x Irma and now (thanks to you) actually think Will x Susan is totally legit, but I really did not enjoy this chapter at all!
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  • From Shaellin on August 03, 2012
    I'm so thrilled to see another installment of this story! A bit sluttier and less loving than previous offerings but still a real turn on to read. Still looking forward to the next chapter that will advance the developing plot. Loved the little gag before the actual story! XD The interactions between Will and Irma are quite believable and enjoyable, if not quite what we've come to expect in this series, though hardly out of place I think. Also liked the notion that Yan Lin might be watching the girls go at it! LOL! Grandma has eyes EVERYWHERE! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2012
    ...well...siiiiiiiigh. Look, it's written awesome, you get the characters and the sexiness down just right, and don't get me wrong, seeing that Witching Hours is still going just made my day....I'm just.....disappointed that you're really pushing the Will and Irma thing...it's the least engaging dynamic of your story and it detracts from my satisfaction at the Will and Susan love story. It's not bad or anything like that, it's just.....not what I wanted to read, and so....common...

    I dont wanna be negative so I want to say again that it's really well written and that your a great author, and I still look forward to these chapters so, so much!
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  • From Shaellin on February 22, 2012
    It's been ten months now since the last update went up. I've really been hoping for more on this hot story. I wanna know how the talk with Hay Lin's parents goes! Will she introduce Orube as her girlfriend? How much will she tell them about being a Guardian? Will she let them in on the secret that Yan Lin is still alive? What will they have for dinner when Orube takes Hay Lin out on their date? So many questions!

    I kind of like Anon's suggestion to have Irma start getting it on with one of the other moms, but maybe not Cornelia's mom. How about Taranee's mom instead? She is hot! It would be fun to see Irma and Taranee's mom flirting with each other while trying to hide it from Taranee. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2012
    this is great, i hope you continue it soon, since you ask for ideas what about irma not being able to get the idea of will and susan out of her head and deciding to try out a relationship with a milf herself, only it doesnt have to be with her mom, maybe one of her friends moms? that coudl be great for getting some situations to work with the characters, like if she started to date cornelia's mom for example not only could you write about that sexy relationship but also about how it affects irma and cornelia's friendship.

    but i have to admit a lot of this idea is just me wanting irma to find someone other than will so she can stop getting in the way of will and susan lol!
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  • From garsdal on December 07, 2011
    This is officially one of my favourite WITCH stories.
    sensuality, lust, uncertainty, lust, teenage angst, lust and a healthy dose of raw sex.
    the only flaw I could find in the story as a whole is Will learning of the g-spot After using Irma's to get her off and being so bashful and shy with her mother after domineering her friend with her mothers help earlier.
    Other than that its hot yuri goodness all the way.
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  • From ThePastmaster on October 11, 2011
    Wonderful. I'm guessing that the next chapter will be the conclusion of the story?
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  • From ANON - Fork Notecard on June 25, 2011
    Wow Hay Lin, put off meeting back up with friends and family who have been worried because you disappeared all day just so you can suck face with your girlfriend a little move.....kind of a dick move there! No but seriously, this chapter was great, even more than I would have thought it would be, I can't believe I missed it when you updated it. I hope more is soon coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2011
    I love this story, you write it very good and it is very true for the characters. I think one chapter should be what it is like for Will and Susan to have a date in a public place.
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